Reviews for Undisclosed Desires
colourfulchatterbox chapter 1 . 6/11/2011

I have recently acquired an appriciation of threesome/foursoomes...but only when they are well written. This is FANTASTICALLY written. :D

Love this. So freaking hot...will we ever hear what Edward was thinking during this? ;)
momams chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
It's a really really great O/S, I think one of the best I've read on this type of relationship. It's usually Bella and Edward and then Jasper comes into the mix, or Edward and Jasper joined by Bella. This one is unique and I found it a great idea to shake things differently.

It was really amazing, loved it!
theladyingrey42 chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
Mmm I needed a good slashy threesome. Thanks!
laura lou who chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
Mmmm... yummy tart goodness.
Raven's twimom chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
Great o/s! I luv these 3 together. Its a shame you wont continue but I enjoyed it regardless! For your first slash, you did well. Thanks for writing.
Raeya chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Wow that was hot! And loved the story line as well. Beautifully written.
kinsano chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
OMG! Even though I'm not into slash, that was incredibly hot! And a pierced Edward? Somebody fan me, please! ;)
naelany chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
wouldn't mind reading a little more about them getting together... flesh it out more ;-) (yes, pun was intended :-p)
kirifox chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
WOW, just...WOW! More please!
KellanCougar chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
If this is your first slash AND your first lemon then the sky is the limit for you! This was outstanding. Good luck in the awards.
rionr chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
OMG... i need a cold cold cold shower, that was hot
InaV chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
That was sooooo hot!

I loved that you started with J and B :)

So, I'm going to bed, uh, to lie down... Yeah, gotta lie down! With my man...
Pyejammies chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Mmmm, yummy scrummy. Three is definitely not a crowd.
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Fab. xx
jujubmom chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Excellent, well written story. I'm disappointed to hear that you don't intend to continue. You have set up an intriguing back story. I loved that you put Bella and Jasper together with Edward being "the one that got away". Thanks for taking the time to write and for sharing your talent with me.
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