|Reviews for Undisclosed Desires|
| Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
| jujubmom chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Excellent, well written story. I'm disappointed to hear that you don't intend to continue. You have set up an intriguing back story. I loved that you put Bella and Jasper together with Edward being "the one that got away". Thanks for taking the time to write and for sharing your talent with me.
| madiwood chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
...Wow. Just wow! I haven't read the reviews yet but I'm willing to bet people are begging for more of this. I'm one of those begging. On my knees here. Either way. Absolutely amazing! Thanks for taking the time to create this!
| MustangMel1968 chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
That was so hot!
| twificreader chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
Wow - that was - um - yeah -
no words - but I liked it...
| kazbar65 chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Are you in my bedroom? OMG what a first try at lemons and slash. You are a natural. The build up and wait. The nervousness, the surprise and anticipation. All so eloguently written. You painted fantastic pictures with your words. Bravo.
| Autumnltd chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Well done. So well done... ;)
| T-W1610 chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Perfect, and absolutely MEGA hot one-shot... loved it. And loved that you started with J/B rather than E/B and worked E in later. Really well written!
Am off for a cold shower now... *phew*
| AydenMorgen chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Thank you for rec'ing this to me last night, sweetie! It was freaking hot! I'm now demanding all my slashy girls read it. Loved it!
| pipelynn chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
I loved this! i saw this nominated for a golden lemon award and went to read it... i am a big Trip Home fan, but sorry you will not be continuing with them! this was fun. i love this jasper. thanks for writing.
| Whitney Love chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
This was hot and naughty, I loved it.
| mouthwatering1 chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
I found you at the lemon awards...WOW.. it's nice reading about something I will never get to do.
| FrenchKatie chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
This is so fucking hot! So amazingly arrousing. Good story line and well written. Great Lemon!
| eternallyedward chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
This was so hot, I loved that Edward was someone from Bella's past and not just a random hookup. This is begging to be continued (please?). I've read The Trip Home, it's similar but different. I love the dynamic in your you'll change your mind?..
| NCChris chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
That was fantastic! Akyria recommended your OS to me and I am so impressed! Such a fantastic and well rounded poly OS. It wasn't rushed or stilted; it was quite honestly perfection! Well done and I will definitely be recommending this to others!