Reviews for Undisclosed Desires
kazbar65 chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Are you in my bedroom? OMG what a first try at lemons and slash. You are a natural. The build up and wait. The nervousness, the surprise and anticipation. All so eloguently written. You painted fantastic pictures with your words. Bravo.
Autumnltd chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Well done. So well done... ;)
T-W1610 chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Perfect, and absolutely MEGA hot one-shot... loved it. And loved that you started with J/B rather than E/B and worked E in later. Really well written!

Am off for a cold shower now... *phew*
AydenM chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Thank you for rec'ing this to me last night, sweetie! It was freaking hot! I'm now demanding all my slashy girls read it. Loved it!

pipelynn chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
I loved this! i saw this nominated for a golden lemon award and went to read it... i am a big Trip Home fan, but sorry you will not be continuing with them! this was fun. i love this jasper. thanks for writing.
Whitney Love chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
This was hot and naughty, I loved it.


mouthwatering1 chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
I found you at the lemon awards...WOW.. it's nice reading about something I will never get to do.
FrenchKatie chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
This is so fucking hot! So amazingly arrousing. Good story line and well written. Great Lemon!
eternallyedward chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
This was so hot, I loved that Edward was someone from Bella's past and not just a random hookup. This is begging to be continued (please?). I've read The Trip Home, it's similar but different. I love the dynamic in your you'll change your mind?..
NCChris chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
That was fantastic! Akyria recommended your OS to me and I am so impressed! Such a fantastic and well rounded poly OS. It wasn't rushed or stilted; it was quite honestly perfection! Well done and I will definitely be recommending this to others!
Madam Akyria chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
Oh My F'ing God. That was your first lemon damn! That was so HOT! It was perfect! (I don't think I would have found it on my own, so thanks for filling out our one shot form)

Just awesome!
SexyLexiCullen chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
Wow. Your first lemon?

It was pretty damn hot for a first lemon.

Great job!

It definitely got me going.

This was amazing!

Thanks for sharing that.
imwithemmett chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
Yummy! That sure was hot. If you ever change your mind about continuing this one I'll be waiting for more.

I also enjoyed The Trip Home. You are right that is a really good rec for those that enjoyed this.
Twinabler chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Wow, just wow! Epic win grand slam awesomeness! The trip home is the fic that introduced me to slash, but I've never searched it out. I've seen this OS on twilighted and the coffee shop. It was on my tbr list, but then after reading geekwards updates a/n I realized you were the author and couldn't resist! The relationship you have portrayed in this one chapter is so different than the trip home. I know you aren't interested in doing a full story, but I'm pleading with you to consider the possibility of a couple more additions. Almost epi-style to show where they went from here. Congrats I loved it!
IkeaGoddess chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
And there I was thinking the shower scene in EC:CoaLSG was too hot to handle...well this was on fire. Damn, girl, I wish there were more.
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