|Reviews for A Worthy Warrior|
| Love.Fiction.2016 chapter 2 . 6/5/2013
7ia? WhAt kind of names that?
| Mystery99 chapter 33 . 6/4/2013
That was ... AMAZING! This was my first full reading of a chronicles of narnia fanfic ever and must I say bravo and brava. It was just Sunday that I watched the first and second movie for the very first time (not purposely I was just bored and scrolling the channels) and now I'm hooked of the entire thing. How come I never bothered to read the books or watch the movies years ago? Well better late than never. But I simply HOPE that you make a sequel. I've been reading this for the past three days
| DJ chapter 24 . 5/22/2013
| DJ chapter 16 . 5/22/2013
Yay! She gets rescued
| Guest chapter 33 . 5/17/2013
i dont get what was zia's choice
| Guest chapter 33 . 5/17/2013
i think its best likek this without a sequel
| Allie Danger chapter 3 . 5/17/2013
im so excaited! :)
they so cute together already!
| Allie Danger chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
1313 that was so cool!
i almost imagine myself watching Edmund (i know is him) swimming!
i cant wait to read more...
I would do just that
| Pendragon2601 chapter 33 . 5/17/2013
It's been awesome. I've just read through your epilogue (it's weird to say that) and although it was great, it still left some unanswered questions like, why has Zia been hiding away from Ed when she was so relieved to be with him? Other than that it was cool. Let me know when you want to start brainstorming on a sequel. :)
| Amandla123 chapter 33 . 5/16/2013
Please make a sequel
| d1x1lady chapter 13 . 2/12/2013
So elegantly written. A lovely story!
| LostInTheWorldOfFiction chapter 28 . 1/23/2013
Great chapter ;)
| Pendragon2601 chapter 28 . 1/23/2013
Reviewing as I read by the way...as I normally do...
First off, I'm happy that Edmund and Peter got back to the Cair safely. Edmund is a bit of a martyr ain't he? If only Zia was there to set him straight, hehe.
Second, Tigran is definately in hot water isn't he? Hope his plan works and doesn't backfire...or maybe it should...hmm... No spelling mistakes as far as I can see so that's good. Maybe a few sentences could be restructured slightly to add more description, such as when Edmund is refusing help from Ivy at the beginning, rather than telling the readers through dialogue, why not show Ivy doing that and an expression from her face or something. Ivy is quite similar to Alex but can be both motherly and a chatterbox, going off on tangents at times when she's worried. Anyway back to the review...
I liked the description of the magic on Tigran when he is trying to escape, you know the tingling bit. I liked this chapter a lot, it had enough tension in it to let the readers know that the is obviously going to be a battle soon and a good climax to the story which is good. Who is "she" I wonder? Hmm...
Update soon and we shall continue plotting...I mean brainstorming. :)
| LostInTheWorldOfFiction chapter 27 . 1/22/2013
Yaayy! An update. I haven't forgotten about this story. Great chapter, and I can't wait for the next one. :)
| Guest chapter 26 . 1/10/2013
Oh my God update! It's been a month! People probably forgot about it!