|Reviews for Served Cold|
| nonconformist9041318 chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
What worked for me - the way you had clearly read the book on which this was based well. Orm Pender was very much Orm Pender as Jones created him, and that's brilliant.
What didn't - the servant had just a tiny bit too much free will.
| Eldarion chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Wow. That was horrifying, yet striking. Absolutely true to Orm's twisted character, and believable in relation to the descriptions of the Slaves and the way they broke. The reasoning for why Martellian was not just killed was intriuging to me - it is something that was never explained in the book but does demand some explanation - and I think revenge is a fitting and believable reason. The idea of the names of the children being the first six people the Slave had killed - and that he remembered those names - was chilling, and powerful. Overall, this is one of the most well written and powerful fanfics I have ever read. Bravo.