Reviews for Namikaze of Lightning
Dust chapter 3 . 2/7/2011
Awesome story keep it coming
flame55 chapter 3 . 2/7/2011
this is great
HoodFox 3 chapter 3 . 2/7/2011
Hmmm I like it. This tory is cool and i don't see anything you could really improve on so, two thumbs up!

I have an idea though; make danzo's rebellion soon so tsunade and people who liked naruto can leave to kumo. And let him start training with kirabi soon.
HolyKnight5 chapter 3 . 2/7/2011
First, at the end, where he says "Namikaze Uzumaki Naruto, now you're a Shinobi of KONOHA! He ain't on Kumogakure, duh?

Anyway Orochimaru...that fool...considering that MOST of the frontier of Rice Country, where most of his bases are, its with an ALLY of Lighting Country and the Hidden Cloud, Sasuke's act against a "distinguished scion of one of Kumo's older clans" its the PERFECT excuse for A to invade Rice Country and Otogakure, and let his country show the power of its Hidden Village, while gaining experience for his troops...if Orochimaru escapes narrowly the invasion of Rice Country, he will curse the moment on that he acceded to the foolish petition of Sasuke...

..it would be a blow to Konoha's pride and reputation, that the worst criminal of their village, that came close to defeat them, was defeated by the power of Kumogakure, and its power reduced to near nothing...If Tsunade was smart, i can see her being alerted by Sai...then pulling an stunt that ends weakening and ridiculing Konoha, while leaving her on freedom of action to leave to Kumo...
Anttolas chapter 3 . 2/7/2011
great chapter the story is progressing well, see ya next chapter:)
Advent of Shadows chapter 3 . 2/7/2011
"Relax, we can change the color. White is too noticeable so we'll ask a tailor to do that. It'll still be your father's but with your own style." The older blonde said smiling.

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AoS: Do you want me to slam my head repeatedly on my desk? The Kumo flak jackets are... white. Yep, you just had a Kumo ninja say that the color of their flak jackets are too noticeable so he should get his cloak dyed a different color.

And then, you give him a white flak jacket regardless.

Other than that (sighs) the chapter was good. I'm a big fan of Naruto/Samui, but inconsistancies and harems sort of make it hard to get into the story.
chm01 chapter 3 . 2/7/2011
will sasuke ver stop being gay? not a chance in hell.
nicklaren chapter 2 . 2/5/2011
very nice chapter please update soon
Elemental Dragon Swordman chapter 2 . 2/3/2011
It was really sad to hear what happened to Inari and looks like things are getting better for Naruto now that he is in Kumo. I wonder how Naruto will meet Samui.
OBKDZ chapter 2 . 1/25/2011
Hello, a quick comment to tell you that the beginning of

your fic is really interesting. I do not see th point

negative at the moment. Continuous-like that!

For the couple ... For pity's sake, do not make a Harem!

It's a question I ask myself regularly. Why

when naruto did not with Hinata, Sakura and Ino, it

becomes a Harem 95% of time ... It's just horrifying!

This idea that it must remake revive his clan, he must

necessarily have 45,000 women ... bullshit! This mania

make a harem is really boring ... We hardly see

more than that! Good fiction is also an innovative fiction!

So please for pity's sake do not fall into the trap

the harem, and we made a fic Naruto Samui! And the

This innovative move will be given that there is

almost no (or what I would call then abandoned because

it's been several months that there is no update)

So good in all cases so far, the story is

good, enjoyable read. I really hope that you will not continue in harem-like so I could continue

read it;)

OBKDZ, who read a little French from English to

improved her English
bankai777 chapter 2 . 1/22/2011
naruto needs more than just one woman to restart his clan nothing personal against to include yugito,fu,tsunami,koyuki,shion,haruna and amaru as will danzo react when naruto uses the hiraishin on his root naruto teach the rasengan and the hiraishin to his new comrades in rest of the allies that are friends with naruto namikaze should start to break away from their alliances with that happens konoha will stand alone and not last very to include toki from bird country and sasame fuma into naruto's harem too.
Raikage-sama chapter 2 . 1/20/2011
Good start. I look forward to the future of this story. I'm a big Kumo fan. Personally I wouldn't mind Naruto being on Killer Bee's team but have the Raikage make him his personal student (similar to how Jiraiya did Naruto).
spiritwolf35 chapter 2 . 1/20/2011
I guess I will check this story out I just hope you will update moe often and will Naruto be paired up with anybody else other than with Samui
narutodekenzieboy chapter 2 . 1/19/2011
Love this...

I like the pairing (NaruSamu)...

I hope Samui is same age with Naruto...

And i get slightly confused with Raikage name (A...What a name!)...

Continue?
superhyoga chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Hello:

The new story is very good. The pair Naruto / Samui is very good. But, My opinion is that the best option for pair for this story it would be Naruto / Samui / Yugito / Mei Terumi.

Bear in mind that the clan Namikaze is a clan now extinct, except for naruto, and that would be very difficult for naruto to return to repopulate it, having a wife alone.

If it could be possible, enclosed I would add Hinata to the harem of naruto, providing that she should not know of the clan hyuga or exile of konoha, or both things.

All that they are not but, suggestions that, as a companion author, I do to you, I hope that you do not feel ever offended, and if I have offended you, hope that you can forgive me.

Superhyoga.
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