|Reviews for golden sun naruto|
| CORRUPTION chapter 2 . 2/27/2014
ha to this A.K.U fella why so serious? its almost as if you a homosexual for this nuruto fella, trying to make things so perfect for it. and try you worst on my writing, id like to see you try, asswipe.
| twinkletoes chapter 2 . 10/25/2011
...why not just set this on hiatus, then?
| onslaught172 chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
are u planing to update this or wat cause it seem interested
| A.K.U chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
Dude, with all due respect...
You Seriously f* #ed up the beginning.
I know you might not want to hear this, but seriously...
A Brief discription of what the heck happens in the beginning as the first chapter? That just ruins it for the readers. I, as a reader, want to READ what happens AS It happens... I don't want to read some dincky little two bit sentences that tell me what happened. I Want To SEE the Action as it Unfolds. I want to read what Naruto's Reaction is to him waking up as he wakes up...
Judging by your spelling and your Autor Story count (Its in the upper left hand corner underneith the Add space) You're a new author so I'm sorry if this insults you or whom ever else happens to read this reveiw, But if you really want people to read your fics, you need to write better Chapters than this cause this is like giving a dying man who's lost in the Desert a barrel full of water and than the poor guy finds out its not really water in the Barrel. Come on Man, (or woman as the case may be) I bet you can do alot better than this...
| vash3055 chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
sounds great go with it