Reviews for Changes
98leahcullen chapter 2 . 11/2/2023
perdón por los errores ortográficos.
si bien me gusta la pareja, si me parece muy frustrante que Hinata no pueda hacer nada para mejorarse así misma. no se preocupa por ser una mejor ninja y todo lo que quiere es a ese chico, no es diferente a sakura, pero el caso de Hinata es peor por que todas sus esperanzas y motivación solo va por un hombre. no se esfuerza lo suficiente para ser una verdadera kunoichi. pudo entrenar con anko, pudo ser asta una ninja medica, ella además del taijutsu de su familia tenía afinidades de rallo y fuego así que esta no se molestara en aprender jutsus en sus afinidades es por si un desperdicio de lo peor, hasta pudo ser una ambu, pero como el rubio es su única aspiración entonces esta condenada a ser una fracasada patética.
lo siento en cerio me gusta mi historia, pero cuando leo que ella solo quiere ser reconocida por el tragón de ramen algo en mi se indigna.
98leahcullen chapter 1 . 11/2/2023
si bien me gusta la pareja, si me parece muy frustrante que hinata no pueda hacer nada para mejorarse así misma. no se preocupa por ser una mejor ninja y tolo lo que quiere es a ese chico, no es diferente a sakura, pero el caso de hinata es peor por que todas sus esperandas y motibación solo va por un hombre. no se esfuerza lo suficiente para ser una verdadera kunoichi. pudo entrenar con anko, pudo ser asta una ninja medica, ella ademas del taijutsu de su familia tenía afinidades de rallo y fuego así que esta no se molestara en aprender jutsus en sus afinidades es por si un desperdicio de lo peor, hasta pudo ser una ambu, pero como el ruvio es su única aspiración entonces esta condenada aser una fracasada patetica.
lo siento en cerio me gusta mi historia, pero cuando leo que ella solo quiere ser reconocida por el tragón de ramen algo en mi se indigna.
Danny Williams chapter 8 . 3/29/2022
Great story with plenty of action suspense and humor.
You set the story up very good with a good preview of Sakura and her wish for revenge.
starfiction123 chapter 8 . 11/30/2020
This is my favorite one so far. Mainly because it's completed and I liked the idea as an AU cause again, though sauske is likeable in boruto, I really wouldn't mind if he kicked the bucket. The chase after him that was a while ago was a whole 100 plus something worries with him turning around saying he'd be homage and like the new madara only to get his butt whooped, lose his arm and then get to go on a vacation to find himself and he's humble pie?! Naw. I still feel like he got off too easily lol so this was refreshing. I wish the sequel continued somehow
VacantThoughts chapter 3 . 11/5/2020
The romance happened way too quickly in my opinion.
Ohfortheloveofpete chapter 1 . 10/28/2020
I thought the villains of that arc sucked.
Anonymous chapter 3 . 9/4/2020
Ive been reading your naruhina fics and just wanted to let you know i enjoy them a lot!
iacopo.passerini chapter 3 . 7/26/2020
Divertente!
Crimson Hawk Wolf chapter 1 . 5/6/2020
I really wish you were still around to work on more chapters and stories you have. I really enjoy what you have going so far.

I also really hope that during this time we are in that things aren’t going to bad for you. I hope your able to stay healthy and that those close to you are able to as well.
Guest chapter 8 . 1/5/2020
Finally a fic where Naruto and Hinata training together with Jiraiya! Would be interesting if you tell the three years time skip 'bout Hinata development to teens!
Tx
Plz keep going
SocialSuicideGirl chapter 8 . 7/19/2019
Great story! I have to say, even when I didn’t agreewith certain plot points that happened in the story, I really enjoyed the way you told it! There’s just something in your narrative style and the dialogue of the characters that really reminds me of the actual way they speak and act in the anime.

So umm, to be honest I kind of feel like your story jumped the shark a tad when Sasuke attacked & got killed, after that things seemed to go a bit haywire and “omg! We need to wrap this up!” but having said that it was still very well done and fantastic that you saw the story through to a conclusion, there are just so many stories out there with really strong beginnings that seem to get abandoned, it’s just sad, so you should be really really proud that this isn’t one if them!

At the end of the day I kind of want to say poor Kiba, he didn’t do anything to deserve all this upheaval in his life, but I guess now that Sakura is hopping aboard Sasuke’s revenge bandwagon he can just join Choji & Ino’s genin team now. I never really loved Sakura, but all of the Sakura- bashing really took me aback a bit, especially when all of a sudden she and others were assessing how tragic her life had become now that she would never have the chance to “get with” any other guys from the Konoha 12..? That was weird.

In any case, I really enjoyed your story all in all, And I really hope you did write a Shippuden follow-up, it would be really interesting to see where you took the story after this and see how far it diverges from canon with all the changes you’ve made already! :)
ChRiAn chapter 1 . 5/31/2019
Little bit late to the party, but none the less: Great story, I really enjoyed reading it. Only one minor nitpick: Tsunade rages about a team not needing two trackers and then puts Kiba and Hinata back on the same team a minute later. Would have been interesting to see the dynamic with Ino or Choji instead on the team. No need for the forced lovetriangle team no 2.
Guest chapter 8 . 5/15/2019
Man. If Sakura is gonna act like a little bitch someone needs to slap the darkness out of her. And I think that should be hinata
Right What Is Wrong chapter 8 . 3/6/2019
NaruHina fluff is great, as always.

...wow, Sakura's psycho.

I'm not even sure I can call that OOC, since she was pretty awful towards her 'friends' in canon at various points. She could really go either way - becoming more mature or throwing a tantrum and traveling a darker road. Since Sasuke's dead, it's not all that surprising she went psycho. This is the girl who MARRIED him after he killed her in a genjutsu and was perfectly content with a loveless marriage in which she was never even KISSED, after all.

Nice fic.
Right What Is Wrong chapter 3 . 3/6/2019
Makes sense Gaara would do the job. He doesn't have the same emotional attachment and understands that, barring a miracle, some people are just going to kill and kill and kill until they're put down.

Heck, Sasuke was actually further gone than Gaara. The sand jinchuuriki was basically lashing out like a dog trained for pit fighting because everyone treated him like trash and the one person who claimed to love him tried to assassinate him, then told Gaara as he was dying that he'd always loathed him. On top of all that, he had a demon whispering into his mind and keeping him from ever entering deep sleep (or much sleep at all). Little wonder he snapped. The moment someone made a human connection with him, he began to "rehumanize himself", as the lyrics go.

Meanwhile, Sasuke had human connections, was well-treated, and still went murderous. I'm surprised Gaara didn't privately hate him for that - it speaks well to the kid's character once he finally got an ounce of good treatment. People talk about Naruto having every right to resent Sasuke, but Gaara had it even worse - Sasuke got forgiven despite actively defecting from Konoha and working against its interests, but Gaara was objectively the shinobi wonderboy, even making it through an S-Class mission without a scratch, and got loathed for it. As such, he's got to understand Sasuke is an irretrievable mad dog and put him down with pity, but not remorse.

Sorry to ramble, but I'm just impressed at how much sense it makes to have Gaara end Sasuke's life.
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