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ChristyWIX chapter 22 . 11/23/2013
I remember thinking this back in chapter one. Why is Edward living his father's dream and not his own? I don't understand why he's going to work for his dad's company, when he clearly, really doesn't want to. Ugh. I think that BxE need to figure out what they want to do 'together'. Perhaps, even leaving Forks again, to get on track with their own lives.
ChristyWIX chapter 21 . 11/23/2013
I know this is listed as humor and romance, so that has me a little excited that the contracts are actually null and void now. If it was listed as drama or angst, I would know they weren't out of the woods yet. There is so much left to happen . . . for both Bella and Edward. Let alone Rosalie and Emmett. Oh and Charlie still needs to find out and stop the nonsense. Onwards . . .
ChristyWIX chapter 20 . 11/23/2013
You had me scared there for a minute on the marriage clause . . . I'm happy they can still use that. However, it'll be interesting to read what James does when his precious commodity is gone. What's more, can't wait for the showdown between James and the Chief! 'Cause James will be a dick like that and expose Bella to her family in an awful way.
ChristyWIX chapter 19 . 11/23/2013
Yay! The return of Alice. I wonder what the wonderful 'lil pixie will have up her sleeve once she learns what's gone on in her absence?
ChristyWIX chapter 18 . 11/23/2013
I really like how they keep getting all worked up, and then backing off. It's like your whole story is foreplay for these two. I like it. Now, poor BxE have to face James alone, without EmxR being there with them. Shit!
ChristyWIX chapter 17 . 11/23/2013
Awww, they're married. Now, let's hope they live to speak about it later . . . 'cause James is gonna kill them all. I think that Emmett and Rosalie should've gotten married as well. Then she'd be out of her contract too. I wonder why you didn't have that happen . . . must be a reason there somewhere.
ChristyWIX chapter 16 . 11/23/2013
Poor Bella has to go up and film a movie . . . with I'm assuming will be double penetration . . . that super sucks! Interesting contract out . . . wonder if they'll do it? What'll James do to everyone then? Yikes!
ChristyWIX chapter 15 . 11/23/2013
I was wondering when the folks surrounding Bella and Rosalie would notice Edward and Emmett hanging around the various locales. They've got to be more careful . . . or, they'll be found out for sure. Very proud of Edward for turning down Bella's advances. I bet most of the other readers want them to get their freak on, but not this one. I definitely want it later though . . . just not yet . . . they've got shit to work through first.
ChristyWIX chapter 14 . 11/23/2013
I'd like the two of them to have the month long chat to get everything behind them. They need to start somewhere . . . and, she needs to stop being hot and cold with him. It's going to make his head pop off . . . LOL. He definitely loves her, we do know that much. However, she's not given any indication that she cares for him.
ChristyWIX chapter 13 . 11/23/2013
I wonder if it's a defense of hers, to hide behind that mask of hers? She's unwilling to let herself believe she can get out. It's sad. She's lost her hope. I was thinking that between Edward's accounting degree, which can be used for finance. Emmett's degree in architecture, for use in set design. Alice's management skills. Jasper's writing abilities. They could almost start their own production company for legit films. In lieu of the porn industry.
ChristyWIX chapter 12 . 11/23/2013
Wow, so she's not as big an actress as described in earlier chapters. That explains the lack of money. Still sixty films? All those AVN awards? She's got to be pulling in much more per picture. I still think that Jmes is not paying her properly. I also love that Edward, or was is Emmett, called her out on the fact that she's not helping Charlie, only enabling him. He's so proud of the job she's doing . . . and yet, he's got no idea how far down the ranjit hole she's fallen. He will lose his shit when he finds out what she's been doing to 'enable' his gambling habit. Actually, I can't wait for that to happen . . . just to shame the Chief! He deserves it.
ChristyWIX chapter 11 . 11/23/2013
Sorry, no. Porn stars make about five to ten thousand per film. Some even much, much higher than that. So, if she's only being paid that little, than James is screwing her over. You've said she was one of the top stars, so she'd be making that kind of money. She would've had the debt paid off in no time. And, if Edward or Emmett tell the Chief what his gambling has caused his only child to resort to, I'll bet he would finally quit. I still wonder what would've happened if the Chief would've rented Clash of the Titans that night instead of aedward?
ChristyWIX chapter 10 . 11/23/2013
Not really liking Bella a whole lot, but I imagine it's all an act she's been putting on in her life for the last several years. Hopefully, Edward can reach the Bella buried deep inside this Bella. Clearly, something's up with the contract . . . James has her by the proverbial balls somehow. Onwards . . .
ChristyWIX chapter 9 . 11/23/2013
You aren't kidding . . . fuckery abounds, indeed!
ChristyWIX chapter 8 . 11/23/2013
I can't believe Alice went with the ambush! Holy crap! I guess Jasper also knows about this as he's the writer and prepared them for this. I wonder how pissed she's going to be? Onwards . . .
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