|Reviews for Coming Home|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/15/2014
Your stories are my favorite in here! This is maybe the tenth time im reading this! Sorry im lazy and i forget to leave comment every time
| jugies chapter 5 . 12/29/2013
nice story I love how you portrayed the relationship between zoro and luffy. There were several hilarious moments as well.
| mountain ash chapter 5 . 11/28/2013
Amazing job! All of the emotional stuff was so well handled, and the luzo was so adorable. Keep writing!
| Kisaki Sakura chapter 5 . 10/2/2013
I really admire you for this amazing story.
| BMO8 chapter 5 . 9/19/2013
Omg i absolutely love this story. It's fantastic and the emotions are perfect. More more more :D
| emerri pika chapter 5 . 6/19/2013
Amazing story I loved ur writing !
| Tricky chapter 5 . 5/26/2013
Yesss, I loved reading this story. Thanks :)
| Minca chapter 5 . 5/4/2013
That was beautiful! I loved reading this. The balance between desire and vulnerability was perfect (: I wish there more fics like this one. Keep up the good work!
| deadhemoglobin chapter 4 . 3/22/2013
This fic reminds me a lot of Royal Garden *SOBS* y'know when there's deep analysis of Luffy and Zoro's relationship. *SOBS INTO THE NIGHT*
THANK GOD FOR AMAZING WRITERS AND ARTISTS
| deadhemoglobin chapter 3 . 3/22/2013
Oh poor innocent Usopp! Holy shit eventhough I read this quite a few times, it still makes me laugh. Shit Usopp- hang in there.
| deadhemoglobin chapter 2 . 3/22/2013
Oh shoot. Sanji actually sat on the edge of the table. LMAO I can just imagine him freaking out and being scarred for life. OHMYGOD Roronoa. Two of your fic universes mixed in my head. XD
| deadhemoglobin chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
Yeah it's me lol
I really wonder what the Straw Hats' reactions are gonna be if that momentous Thriller Bark incident is revealed. Esp Luffy. Or will it really be unfolded- and if so, how and why and by whom. Or if Zoro and the others decide to take it to their graves.
And OH I love their reactions, esp Nami and Sanji. XD Aww yes I love it when the crew discusses Luffy/Zoro relationship. I'm close to sobbing. Again.
P.S. YOU GO ROBIN, influencing Nami-san like that.
| jess chapter 5 . 3/11/2013
ahh you are really good at writing i like like like LOVE! can you please keep writing?
| Kamizacondor chapter 4 . 1/17/2013
Amazing! I really like the way you portray them emotionally. It really seems to fit. I also like this top/bottem switching, makes more sense to me instead of Luffy always being a bottom. The writing style is really great and you approach some really nice subjects. This can fit right in the actual story which only makes it more realistic. Great job! :D
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/8/2013
hello there! this is the fifth time i 've read this story! it's amazing and the most IC story i've ever read in one piece fictions and ZoLu! you are an awsome writer and i'm sorry i didn't review all the chapters but i was so excited to read more that i forgot! please make another fic about them! a sequel maybe? i love all the emotional stuff and the two of them are so right together... allow me to tell you that i LOVE you you are amazing and so are your stories!