Reviews for The Kept Men's Club
KimiD chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
Hey Mel~

I see that you won 3rd place in the contest, Congrats! Sooo, I was just wondering, when you might be going to update this mysterious o/s, Hmmm?

I find your story facinating~ Different~ Very Original~ with LOTS of potential. I found your story over on FWAR's, LFC Hotstuff ( one of my fav gals) had a link up for the ff page and found your name as the 3rd place winner for the Twilight Zone Fic Contest. Now I know the story you submitted was "I Need a Hero" but the title of this one... just totally caught my eye and called to me so and after reading the summary, I HAD to come read and see what it was about.

I like your style of writing very much and it is one of the kind of writings & story that just sparks your interest and when reading it it's ~~ IDK, just had this quality to it that you HAVE to read it, you WANT to read it, it has an easygoing rhythm to it, a cadence~ if you will. It makes for an enjoyable reading experience. You find yourself watching the car as they are pressed against the window. You are drawn to the poker table and feel comfortable with the "guys", one of them~~ familiar, part of the fun. It was a different kind of feeling than I get when reading a lot of the stories. Like you were one of their friends coming to pay a visit... I REALLY love this style, Your style... Nicely Done! I look forward to reading more of your other stories and cannot wait to see how this one developes and the journey you will take us on. KimiD
vikkisecret42 chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
I really LOVED THIS! :)
gfiction81 chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
Intresting start,I guess she's married to Jacob,like it so far,waiting eagerly for more...
rnbwsktles chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
Are you still planning to continue this story? It's good so far!
Hatty101 chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
Awesome story i love it1 xxx
love4allpplz chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Is the contest over yet? Are you going to continue this story? )
love4allpplz chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
Is the contest over yet? Are you going to continue this story? )
twimomof4 chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
I can't wait for you to work on this story. I love these boys and now they will bring Bella into their club. Love the storyline so far.
Raum chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
It seems you enjoy very much plot twists :)

a good o/s indeed!


- Raum
Jcook169 chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
Interesting start... I can't wait to see where you take this.
scrosby66 chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
Looks like an amazing story... I will keep it on alert...Thanks for writing!
jancamc chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
More, please.
xivi315 chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
i didn't see that one coming! ;D
Luvntwilight chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
Love it! Love your writing!
dreampills chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
okay, 6 months late, but i love this. ) hoping to read more. there's nothing wrong with being a house husband. my fiancee would love to say home while i bring home the money. LOL
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