Reviews for The Road Not Taken
Guest chapter 54 . 4/27
You might want to edit cause the first sentence introduces Will as Bill so I'm laughing really hard right now
kandicegubler chapter 141 . 2/8
I don't know if you know probably do, but March 9th is Matthew's birthday...ok g2g finish it!
kandicegubler chapter 64 . 2/8 some Hotchniss action coming?
Great chapter 41 . 11/1/2014
When reading the dialogue I read it in their voices. One thing though is that I don't like using baby as a term of endearment. Love, sweety, sweetheart, or honey are way better than babe or baby. Just makes me cringe. I stopped reading when I first saw it used and only came back because it sounded like a great story. My friends however, just never continued when that saw that word just so bad.
Dawn Coffin chapter 150 . 7/20/2014
I used to read only multi-chapter fics - I wouldn't even look at anything under 5 chapters - and the longer, the better, though I don't know as I ever came across anything that was 150 chapters :-). I also used to read any rating. A few years ago I got sick of long fics - they all just ended up being a waste of time in the end, I felt. I also stopped reading "M" ratings - they all seemed to have zero story & only porn. This fic was a WELCOME change from that! I think one of the things that changed it for me (besides being worth all the chapters & not having porn) was that it was about 2 people I really wish were together. I feel like I've read every fic there is out there on my favorite couples, but I was asked the question a couple weeks ago "what is your favorite show" & I answered with a show from 20 years ago. Then, the person said "no, I mean current favorite". I really had to think about it & decided Criminal Minds & got thinking how it was a shame that after Reid got those Redskin's tickets, he & JJ never got together. When we found out she was pregnant, I was wishing that it was she & Reid that had been secretly dating. This fic is everything that the show SHOULD be! Congratulations on fantastic writing! You have made me decide to go back & watch the whole series from the beginning (I think you remembered every case!) & try to pick up for myself on any tiny details that would show that JJ had/has feelings for Reid. How I wish the show could be like your fic!
krazyfanfictionfan231 chapter 22 . 5/2/2014
Not really much interaction with the other characters, but it's too soon to judge. It's only been 22 chapters out of 150. Excellent story, though I wish the chapters were longer, but again, that's too soon to judge
Liz 1974 chapter 86 . 3/5/2014
Just want to say I love the pairing in ur story I have always thought it should be JJ/Ried, Morgan/ Garcia & Hotch / Emily don't get me wrong I like Haliey but I think she is a bit selfish she knew what she was getting into before she had jack if she wasn't happy she should of left hotch when he joined the BAU. But no she waited until she had jack then left hotch
Liz 1974 chapter 51 . 3/4/2014
It was hard watching Reid get abused I just watched that one yesterday reading it was also hard I wanted to cry for Ried both times I like this story don't get me wrong but I feel what the team feels I know u understand what I am saying I'm sure it was hard to write Reid getting hurt he is sweet and went through hell
D.C. al Coda chapter 141 . 2/8/2014
I just realized how creepily accurate this was to the series. It's sort of like you knew she was pregnant during that time.
criticallyAcclaimed chapter 5 . 12/15/2013
Christ, I don't know where to begin. I don't even know if you're on this website anymore so who knows if you're gonna read this, but I need to vent.

I just need to impress upon you how selfish your JJ is being. Oh, boo hoo. You can't get with a man you like. Woes you, nobody cares, but the world revolves around you, so let's change the course of history to make everything in your life so spotless it's sickening. And even that's stupid, because she could have just as easily wrapped your Reid around her finger in the future as in the past. Do you know why season one Reid had a crush on JJ? Because his life sucked, and she was likely the first attractive female give him the time of day. Why? Because of his crippling inability to socialize properly, which you seem to gloss over under the veil guise of a "secret life".

You know what else bugs me? Spencer's appearance changes throughout the years she knows him, she THEN gets attracted to him, not by his personality, but by his developing body. She doesn't care for his weird sense of humor, his intellect, or the little quirks-she likes him because he's an attractive male.

I don't even know what else to say. It's like, five in the morning and I'm so tired I can't even log in properly, but jeez. Stories like these, no matter how old, deserve a reprimand or two.

Or three. Or four.

You're likely just going to dismiss this as trolling, but seriously, I hope you write better now than what's displayed in this fic because frankly, it's so OCC I'm going to explode.

Guest chapter 93 . 11/9/2013
Malcolm was played by Shemar Moore rugh
D.C. al Coda chapter 150 . 10/15/2013
Words cannot describe my love for this story. It is just too awesome. It's the way I would have it. I love this story and the BAU children you created. Loving Chloe, Avery, Seth, Jake, Billy, and Henry and Jack. Your writing is just too awesome. Your writing keeps bringing me back to see what happens next. Also, loving the sequels (especially "The Road Before US")! Hope to see your work updating soon!
-D.C. al Coda
misuky7 chapter 150 . 8/16/2013
This was amazing, I'm so sad Jason died though. I can't wait to read the next one. :3
93 Diagon Alley chapter 150 . 5/22/2013
I've spent the last two days reading this story and let me just say, it was freaking fantastic. I can't wait to read the sequels :)
GevoSRCMTMPJdr chapter 15 . 3/9/2013
Kicked like a nine year old black belt girl
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