Reviews for she told me not to step on the cracks
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
"You've changed."

Silence. Blinking.

"People change. It's called life."

Pause. Contemplate. Sigh.

"Don't act like you're so world-weary or anything, because-"


"Because, what?"

Glare. Bites lip. Turns away. Anger.

"This is it, then. I can't do this anymore. I can't watch this happen to us."


"Is there even an 'us' anymore?"


"I don't think there ever was."

Wow. Very powerful.
MissingMommy chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
I loved it. And I also like the story The lady or the tiger.
squeakyswings chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
I've missed your writing so much. And I know that this has been up for ages and that I absolutely suck for not reading it earlier but life's been crazy and such things and tonight I just had to read it and I love it very very much, of course. Because it's your writing and your Lily and your Teddy and they're all so perfect. The scene in the kitchen is beyond magnificent; I love the way you've portrayed Teddy and Lily in it, especially the way you've included Teddy's thoughts.

I believe I'm rambling but this is gorgeous and I'm happy I finally read it and I'm sorry it took so long.

dee the deer chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
*sigh* I love Slytherin Lily. I love LilyTeddy. :)

This was really cute and emotional and well written and I really liked it :)

I use too many 'and's :S
yellow 14 chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
Nice. Keep writing
sweet-dreamrose chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
When I read the ending of this story I could picture Teddy choosing to be with her, probably due to my penchant for happy endings.

But when it comes to The Lady or the Tiger, I agree that she picks the Tiger. I too, felt so unsatisfied at the ambiguity of the ending. The sequel, The Discourager of Hesitancy promised to resolve what happened but it ends with a similar conundrum, to my eternal frustration!
kingslayers chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
Personally I think he should say no