Reviews for The Ultimate Submission
JustARead chapter 1 . 1/11/2017
TinaF chapter 1 . 3/23/2015
Loved it!
Lessons chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
Yes! Yes! Yes! Loved this!
Twilightsatellite chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Holy hotness! Well done!
Toni Masen chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
MarchHare5 chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Loved this. Very well written.
Raven's twimom chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Well done! Loved it!
js18 chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
erika shoval chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
This story line is so different. I really love it.
Kenzersmom chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
interesting...the d/s relationship at times is a mystery to me...
Edward's spouse chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
excellent story.
freakybella chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
That was hot!

missysaaa.crystal chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
Loved it!
ENAddict chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
Loved it! Very hot and very well written! C x
hillcrestella chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
This is a story I have returned to repeatedly. The build up of the whole thing is masterful and you give us enough of each of te characters to get unclear picture of why the scene is so important. I would love to see this expand into further exploits but understand some things are short an convey a wollop of a story. I want you to know I had dinner with some fic girls this evening and raves about this killer one shot that I could no longer find. One of my awesome ladies pinged TheLadyinGrey to find this and I'm glad we did. You have a real way of words that makes sex powerful and all encompassing which is wonderful to read... And re-read... Thank you - and I should have reviewed in depth when I first read it in the contest. My apologies for that.

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