|Reviews for Real|
| KeRose chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
Ah, yes, your pair; SoujixChie.
Dramatic, Romantic, Emotional. All compressed under 400 words. That's defintely worth praising.
I also have a hard time placing where this event is taking place, like both setting and timeline-wise. Is this is after the met Izanami but before they defeat her? As you can see, its been awhile since I played the game, but right now its taking me a while to beat P3:Fes, specifically I am in NewGame waging war against Elizabeth, and losnig.
Anyways, back on track, a good little short one-shot. If anything, its good practice for writing small flashbacks in any future stories you may do that involve conveying emotions in a small span of words.
| Fanficaddict12 chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
Wow, this whole fanfic would make an epic alternate ending in the game. :)