Reviews for A May to December Romance
crackupmonkey chapter 25 . 9/15
What a fabulous chapter. I just love these two. Hope all is well in your world. :)
jtechell chapter 25 . 9/11
I have loved this story for years and I am very happy that you are still working on it
Guest chapter 25 . 9/7
Oh, please, please, please publish more of this wonderful story!
Guest chapter 22 . 9/7
"I could feel it in his taught muscles..." NO. It's TAUT, as in "tight," not "taught," as in "instructed.
Guest chapter 20 . 9/7
"creams and blacks and metallic's" Why would you use an apostrophe? The "metallics" don't own anything. Apostrophes are used only in contractions and to show possession.
Guest chapter 17 . 9/6
"a pair of drooling ogler's." The oglers don't possess anything. Omit the apostrophe.
"waving their arms madly and beaconing to me" Do you mean BECKONING?
Guest chapter 12 . 9/6
"Let her passed." No. Use PAST. PASSED is a verb.
Guest chapter 12 . 9/6
"He wanted me to walk passed her?" is incorrect. It's PAST. PASSED is a verb, not an adverb.
Guest chapter 11 . 9/6
You wouldn't say "I had pictures of I," so don't say "I had pictures of Edward and I." Use ME .
Guest chapter 8 . 9/6
"You lead me on Bella!" The past form of "lead" is LED.
Praying For A Miracle chapter 1 . 9/6
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS SRORY!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Francium chapter 25 . 9/3
Hmmm maybe a miracle will happen and you’ll finish this! If not I loved every second of it nonetheless
Flustered chapter 25 . 8/25
I'm only just now reading this in 2018 and I was so addicted it took me only two days, it would have been less if I hadn't started it so late in the day. There is nothing about this story that isn't perfect. Truly. Admittedly I was a bit ruffled with Victoria but I grew to love your use of the characters we all know. If the original Twilight had been written this way I wouldn't be concerned. Because I could read this over and over and love it the same. Thank you for sharing your work with the rest of us!
Guest chapter 25 . 8/20
Please update soon
magic26446 chapter 25 . 8/18
Wow. That was amazing. It was one of those stories that left me with that dastardly empty feelings after finishing it, like I don't know what to do with myself anymore because the characters eclipsed my mind so completely that, when I reach the end (so far), I don't know how to function anymore. I passed this story over several times, and I'm so glad I finally read it. Thank you!
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