Reviews for The Orphans of Konoha
Evie Glacier Tako chapter 6 . 4/30/2012
I went on to read the next chapters and they are all not there, since it seems like you know that I was wondering if you were ever planning on updating them again? It's been over a year and I really wanted to see where this story was headed (I am combing the Naru fanfics from the first to last page and am on page 716). Please update soon!
jboy44 chapter 7 . 7/25/2011
what the F**K you can't just replays a chapter with being rewrite you leave the old on up tell the rewrites done
The peace sign fighter chapter 4 . 7/7/2011
O-OH MY GOD!

Did Hina REALLY GET THE DIESASE!

D:
Who's that Ama chapter 3 . 7/7/2011
*Reading*:"Only Naruto and Hinata stayed behind.?

Me *Yelling*:Have sex with each other now!
The peace sign fighter chapter 2 . 7/7/2011
WOW!...Hinata was like sooooo totally b*tchy to Naru-Kun! :o
Clove15 chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
Freaky!
isha1012 chapter 10 . 4/29/2011
please hurry and rewrite...please...
naru7 chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
So sad but good
Aki666 chapter 10 . 2/5/2011
Well I look foward to the rewrite when you have time to write it. XD
B3GIN chapter 10 . 1/23/2011
0.0 I went to read chapter 10, but when I went to it there was nothing. Rewrite? You're rewriting the whole thing?

Well, you're the author, and a darn good one so I'm going to trust you. Hope we get to see your lovely story again soon! :)
Hyper-Blossom Zlogin trouble chapter 5 . 1/18/2011
Oh No...
SLP chapter 10 . 1/18/2011
I enjoyed this story in the beginning but its getting kind of confusing now. I wish you left it with how the kids were able to live without the adults and create a functioning society with Hinata as leader with their trials and struggles and how they pull through. The whole kidnapping and the brother/sister traitors thing seems kind of fast and out of nowhere. You did not even let them try to recover from the adult deaths. You did not give Hinata any time to show how her leadership would pull them out of this. Thank you for writing this story since it seems like a good idea but I'm out for the rest of the story. Good luck on your writing.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/17/2011
ARGH FREAK NO
Guest chapter 3 . 1/17/2011
yay Naruto's maturing!
like it chapter 2 . 1/17/2011
hmmm...i like it but i'm totally iffy about it too
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