THIS WAS THE BEST BOOK EVER FULL STOP.
HOW DO YOU WRITE LIKE THAT

Continued very dumb story development. I’m about to stop reading - it’s that bad.

Very stupid, and not believable, development.

Wow this is bad. I read 8 chapters and completely regret it

lol, F.I.D.O is also a police officers term for ( I'll use a polite term) Frig It Drive On. It's for when they see something they don't want to stop for.
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i dont understand why, j.k. rowlin wanted Harry with ginny. especially if she looked like Lily. thank you for the story. i like the different matchups with Harry in fanfiction, but this is the first one I've read about ssan bones. i always thought dumbledore was manipulative.

May I enquire if the author is channeling Professor Trelawney? While T relentlessly predicts the death of H, the author pens an unrelenting series of misfortunes and miseries plaguing poor H and nearly all the characters of this nonetheless quite entertaining tale.

I'm afraid he disappeared after that. When he returned, Tom briefly taught Defense Against the Dark Arts only to be rather suddenly dismissed by Dumbledore.
In canon V was refused the job and subsequently cursed the position.

Creepy house. A bit inconsiderate of folks who may not enjoy such decor. As for myself, I'd find it uncomfortable to visit and impossible to live there. My oh my, poor Harry just can't catch a break. Seems like Azkaban has left him with extreme and dangerous mental illness. Perhaps a mind healer is needed? Excellent story. Thanks

your forgetting mad eye moody entirely if eyes could be restored don't you think they would have restored the eye of the most decorated auror in magical history when he was injured? Or Moody's his leg for that matter ill give you fixing Harry's leg with the spell Voldemort used on Petigrew but the eye is gone replace it with an eye like Moody has you could even make it look like his old eye. you would expect prosthetics to have advanced sense moody lost his eye. Hell even normal people have prosthetic eyes that look normal we are not living in pirate times when they removed his eye in a muggle hospital they would have at least had him fitted for a prosthetic eye. im not trying to flame you mate but make it make sense.

Excellent story.

This story was absolutely amazing!

The engineer killing himself was the stupidest thing I have ever read. What happened to the unforgivables requiring pure hatred? Deus ex machina if I ever saw it

loved the book even if I did whine about a couple of inconsequential details it's was a great read. highly recommend

their can be a boiler explosion but not an actual damaging one in the older trains also the fact that the train would be ran on magic but u know