Reviews for Crumbling
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
WOW!That was gorgeous!Really,the thoughts in this,the way Peter does his part!And the unspoken suspicions,all of it!The war atmosphere was brought out really well ere!And the end,well,i really smiled at that!
hydraspit chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
This was very well done. It fit a perfect dark and angsty tone that is perfect for this part in the story. All in all, a very good read.
Hollocaust chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
That's really, really good!