|Reviews for Void|
| loonytunecrazy chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Aw adoreable and exllcent job here cool job with Arnold thoughtd
| mysterious rainbow pony man chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
Arnold is too passionate...
| deadlyninjabee chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
This was really cute.
Was some of this part of the rumoured The Jungle Movie?
| acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Keep the good writing.
| Sandra Strickland chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
its a really beautiful story.
Please keep writing like this
| Azure129 chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Aw, CharlyKaa, I'm so happy I could inspire you! And I agree, Arnold can be a pretty difficult character to write out, but I think you did a good job with his psychology and feelings in this oneshot :) How he thinks the void in his life is just his parents missing but it's also Helga missing from her life too, and then his feelings finally hitting him one day because he's jealous. I liked it :)
The only grammar thing that I kept noticing is that a few times you had Arnold think "It hurted" when it should just be "It hurt" but otherwise it was very well done :)
~Azure129 aka Jenna
| Anonymous Latina chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
I agree with you Arnold is very dificult but...
WOW! That was Amazing!
I loved the timeline of his feelings, the way you described his doubts and denial that got in the way of him... Filling up that void with happiness, that she meant more to him than he could ever imagine... That she possesed something no one else could replace (not even his parents)
WoW, Thank You so much you're spoiling me! It was definately worth the wait!
P.S. Your closing lines were BEAUTIFUL