|Reviews for The Trials of Commentating|
| Riles16 chapter 1 . 8/5/2017
I'm crying I'm laughing so hard!
| sand beneath our feet chapter 1 . 7/26/2017
AHAHAHHAHAH I love it
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2017
This is so funny
I cant believe Lily is such a rebel
| waiting.for.my.hogwartsletter3 chapter 1 . 7/10/2017
This was awesome! Please write more x
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2017
omg wow that was hilarious i love it siriusly** I'm in stitches
| Miss Mystique chapter 1 . 1/17/2017
Hahahahahahahaha this was bloody HILARIOUS!
| NotAMugwump chapter 1 . 1/3/2017
I love this too much! LOL
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2016
tbh this is my most favorite thing in the world rn
| SoccerDiva chapter 1 . 7/2/2016
I loved this so much! I laughed and smiled the whole way through! You have to be one of my favorite authors, I love all your stories! Lily was just too funny! Oh, and don't forget Mcgonagall, she was hilarious as well! This has to be one of my favorite Jily one shots, and especially cause it was them getting together in a Quidditch game! Anyway, I loved this story! Good job!
PS: Thank you for having your information right and making james a chaser. I hate it when people think he is a seeker cause the movie said he was even though JK Rowling specifically said he was indeed a chaser.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/11/2016
JAMES POTTER IS A SEEKER! WHY ARE THERE SO MANY INCORRECT FANFICS? I LOVE THIS SO MUCH BUT THIS IS INACCURATE!
| HufflepuffGirl-M.Y chapter 1 . 4/23/2016
That was hilarious! I loved it, and would recommend it to anyone in need of a good laugh!
| Lara.x chapter 1 . 4/7/2016
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2016
| spycat chapter 1 . 12/22/2015
Hilarious. Just goes to show how everyone can let loose once in awhile.
| Lilyofthestag chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
I loved this! I couldn't stop laughing. Thank you so much!