Reviews for Nessie's First Hunt
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Cute!
Dawn chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
wow that was really good!wasn't sure at first..but i loved it.
KzintiKiller chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
Nicely done. Jacob and Bella are a little pollyanna, but that's in keeping with canon at that point.

Did you ever notice the deus ex machina in Breaking Dawn? After Eclipse Edward and Bella simply weren't believable as a couple anymore. The wedding and honeymoon felt contrived. Forced. Them living happily ever after with no consequences for Bella's infidelity made no sense at all, but Meyer made them do it anyway.

Did you ever wonder, when Bella showed up pregnant with the miracle baby, why none of the Cullens thought to question its paternity? With Bella's track record it would have been a logical conclusion to jump to, yet no one did.

KK
Mackenzie L chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
Nice job! I liked that you wrote it from Jake's POV.
Forensica X chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
Very fun read. :) I usually don't like oneshots but yours was very sweetly entertaining.
Igoogleeverything chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
a very well written piece, well done