| Reviews for birds and X's |
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   teentitangirl25 chapter 2 . 1/22/2011 this is great! update soon! just like all of you other stories! |
| bluewasabi24 chapter 2 . 1/20/2011 Too short! *cries* Much better! Not as much OOC-ness in this chapter and I LOVE IT! But too short. |
| revengefrank chapter 2 . 1/19/2011 I'm not reax fan but that was kool! |
| Black-winged Angel 100 chapter 2 . 1/18/2011 Pretty good but Raven wouldn't cry like that but still it's pretty good |
| bluewasabi24 chapter 1 . 1/14/2011 Aww... cute! I just have one minor concern: The story is a bit... rushed. I would expect Raven to take a bit more time to trust X like that, and a bit more time for X to take off his mask. Very OOC. Other than that, LOVE IT! Update soon! |
| Juicedmark chapter 1 . 1/12/2011 OMG you have to finish this! It was great. Although I might just think that because I love Red X and raven together. But seriously that was preety good for your first story |
| Celestial Moon Lady chapter 1 . 1/11/2011 I agree with beautifuldreamer. You should try to keep the characters as they are. Or if you're planning on changing their personalities to suit your story better write a warning so that readers are aware that they'll be out of character. I personally don't feel Raven would let RedX get that close to her, or see her her walls broken down without some kind of history beforehand. I wonder if they've had some sort of friendly contact before this meeting? This chapter wasn't "bad" at all. But then that's just me. Instead of "Comon" I think you should write either "come on" or "c'mon". Other than that for your first story you're doing pretty well. I can't wait to read what your next chapter . |
| PenanceGirl chapter 1 . 1/11/2011 CUTTTEEEE! i give it a 9 out of 10:) could of used somemore action like a kiss or somethin,but otherwise cute :) |
| The X Kalamity chapter 1 . 1/11/2011 i loved it! UPDATE! |
| Oreospazz chapter 1 . 1/10/2011 You *tear drops* are* tear drops* so AWSOME Lolz I luv your stories! _! |
| Doidazzleu11 chapter 1 . 1/10/2011 Great story plz continue |
| The Plutomite chapter 1 . 1/8/2011 I really like this story. I think that you should continue please! If you want me to go into detail aobut what I like, I will! |
| Annalynn Roe chapter 1 . 1/8/2011 It wasn't to bad, especially for your first time writing, a few pointers would be to make sure your characters are in character, don't make them do something that doesn't match their personality. Then maybe a bit of description, what her room looks like and all, grammar was good. My final piece of advice... update. Can't wait for the next chapter, gl. |