Reviews for When I see you smile
Zwarte Wolf chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
Hi...I meant to review this several months back...and im now getting to it...anyways. I think that the way you made the poem was amazing. Unrequited love isn't usually angsty. The way Tamao loves Nagisa it will only be angsty in the very end of the storyline but even for her it wont hurt that bad since she is a more mature character and as you reach that maturity all you want is the person you love to be happy :)
FullmetalStorm chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
I love it, I love it, I love it! Tamao and Nagisa belong together!
LenxRinKagamine chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
Aha, this sure sounds like Tamao! Amazing how you can be most of the characters of SP!

By the way, sorry if the question seems kinda irritating, but which stories did you delete?
Chiyo And Osaka Fan chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
So beautiful...I cried a bit...
Major Mike Powell III chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Well, well, soldier...

This was...*O*

Like...D'awwww! Sure, it's one-sided NagiMao, but there are no signs of angst, so 's all good! O

Nice work, marine!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
Ordile chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Wow really well done. U It really explains the concept of Tamao's unrequited love for Nagisa. Not much liking for that pairing, but I had to re-read it multiple times again and I can feel the sort of conveyed emotion while reading it. Unrequited love is sad. D:

Anyways, good job in this one. :D ~