Reviews for The Golden Warriors
Guest chapter 2 . 2/11/2014 sad
sounoichi chapter 2 . 1/16/2011
This is good so far!
Eclipsesong chapter 2 . 1/15/2011
This chapter was wonderful! I loved the way that you displayed my cats personalities and thank you so much for using them, I wasn't expecting them all to be mentioned so much. I can't wait for the next chapter I hope it will be just as great as this one!
Eclipsesong chapter 2 . 1/13/2011
This is great my cats are ancient!
Dreamin'OfABlondeFang chapter 2 . 1/11/2011
:'( you didn't like mine!
Mossfire436 chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
Name: Moon that rises at night

Nickname: Moon rise

Pelt Color: glossy silver she-cat with fuzzy black tipped ears and paws and faint little white spots on her flank with ice blue eyes with a purple tinge in them
Dreamin'OfABlondeFang chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Name: Cloud That Covers Sky At Night

Nickname: NightCloud

Pelt Color: Inky blue pelt with silver belly and the tip of HER tail is also silver (she is a girl) Piercing sea green eyes.

Hope you like her!
decidedlyindecisive chapter 1 . 1/9/2011

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Brightspirit chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Name: Star That Shines In The Sky

Nickname: Star Shine

Pelt Color: midnight black she-cat with golden star-shaped patches and bright amber eyes
Crystalrose368 chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Name: Song of Chirping Bird

Nickname: Song

Pelt Color: beautiful snowy white she-cat with silver flecks & soft blue eyes


Name: Moth that Flies Gracefully

Nickname: Moth

Pelt Color: small, slender golden tabby she-cat with brown specks all over her pelt & warm golden eyes


Name: Whisper of Soft Stream

Nickname: Whisper

Pelt Color: fluffy silver & white dappled she-cat with lake blue eyes


Name: Mist that Covers Lake

Nickname: Mist

Pelt Color: beautiful silver she-cat with white & gray flecks & soft aqua eyes


Name: Light of Shining Sun

Nickname: Light or Light Sun

Pelt Color: tiny golden she-cat with ginger ear-tips & tail-tip, white paws & bright golden eyes


Name: Meadow where Flowers Grow

Nickname: Meadow or Meadow Flowers

Pelt Color: small, slender golden she-cat with brown flecks, ginger ear-tips & captivating sapphire eyes


Name: Lightning that Breaks Dawn

Nickname: Lightning

Pelt Color: broad-shouldered golden tom with silver flecks & fiery amber eyes


Name: Falcon that Soars the Sky

Nickname: Falcon

Pelt Color: golden brown tabby tom with darker flecks & piercing yellow eyes


Name: Wolf that Howls at Night

Nickname: Wolf

Pelt Color: big, muscular russet brown tom with piercing dark blue, almost black eyes


Name: River that Reflects the Moon

Nickname: River

Pelt Color: blue-gray tom with silver & white spots & watery blue eyes


Name: Ray of Blazing Sun

Nickname: Ray or Blazing Sun

Pelt Color: ginger tom with golden flecks & fiery golden-orange eyes


I hope these cats help.
sounoichi chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
For main Character

Clover that dapples the moonlight

A pretty multi bworn and white dappled she-cat with bright topaz eyes that have a turquiose tint around the pupil
Sky Fireheart chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Name: Eve that never casts shadows

Nickname: Eve shadows

Pelt Color: Shiny, Black she-cat with a purple tint with silver dapples over her body and azure eyes.

Name: Wisp of the never-ending star

Nickname: Wisp star

Pelt Color: Golden tom with white paws and a long stripe across the left side of his pelt and also has Emerald Green eyes.
Eclipsesong chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Name: Blaze of Bright Morning Sun

Nickname: Blaze

Pelt Colour: Long-furred bright gold tom with a ginger chest, paws, ears, tail tip and sky blue eyes.

Name: Splash of Rain on Stone

Nickname: Splash

Pelt Colour: Fluffy silver she-cat with black tabby markings and dark blue eyes that have a tint of violet to them.

Name: Glow of Sky after Storm

Nickname: Glow

Pelt Colour: Sleek pale gray tabby she-cat with darker gray flecks and glowing golden eyes which have tints of amber in them.

Name: Howl of Wolf in Moonlight

Nickname: Howl

Pelt Colour: Dark gray tom with a white muzzle, chest, underbelly, legs, paws and midnight blue eyes.

Name: Flake of Falling Snow

Nickname: Flake

Pelt Colour: Long-furred feathery white she-cat with silver tabby markings with pale green eyes which have a tint of light blue in them.