|Reviews for The Lord and Lady Phoenix: The Stone|
| MegurineKaiko chapter 21 . 6/22
You are an amazing writer. I love this story. This should be what the actual books were!
| lilacwaffles chapter 16 . 5/27
| lilacwaffles chapter 8 . 5/26
bob the thestral
| lilacwaffles chapter 5 . 5/26
a sphinx? for a pet? well if it is name it Athena for female and Apollo for male!
| Kane Richards chapter 26 . 4/9
It's a fun read and all... but there just felt like there was so much time spent setting up things for other stories than never came. The whole scene with the animagus forms is somewhat jarring because it never really got expanded upon.
Also, as the Thestral familiar was basically ignored till later in the story, why have him (her?) at all?
| thorri chapter 7 . 4/8
fuck sake harry is still going to be in griffindor
| Epeefencer chapter 13 . 1/27
What's with all the Houses being together in the classes. Houses only shared classes with one other house.
| CescaLR chapter 22 . 1/25
I know this is AGES over but...
it would of been awesome if the ghosts of Christmas past present and future to visit
Percy (stupid ministry sheep)
Dumbledore (obvs. reasons)
molly Weasley (idiotic matriarch )
tom riddle (just for the hell of it - it'd be incredibly funny.)
Ron (cause the pratic git needs a wake-up call.)
et cetera, et cetera.
i'd be hilarious if fudge/ the Malloy males / Umbridge got them too!
Ta ( for reading this incredibly stupid thingy-ma-bob - if you do that is), - Cesca.
| Emilywilson chapter 26 . 1/21
Does he die
| Mystery chapter 3 . 12/30/2014
One. Check! Two, the faeveela. check!
| Mystery chapter 2 . 12/30/2014
First one. Check! Second one, how bout as harry enters platform nine and three quarters his Phoenix flies over to the Weasely's and lands on Ginny harry runs over and apologises about the bird and as he try's to get the bird he touches ginny's hand and a golden glow surrounds them and we'll work from there. Check! Third one, dumbledores bird faux ( can't spell it :( sorry ) Check
| Potterformers chapter 3 . 12/27/2014
you need to work on your grammar and sentencing structures
| I'd bet chapter 2 . 12/3/2014
I'd bet that the bird in the story is the Golden Phoenix!
| 0ak3nsh13ldl0v3r chapter 7 . 11/8/2014
| X chapter 2 . 7/22/2014
Your word play on the street names (Prat Drive & Magic scent) is clever, but it won't work. Why? Because it's not Private Drive, it's Privet Drive (privet being a type of bush which is commonly used to grow hedges). Fits in with that whole 'street names named after plants' thing.