Reviews for Bolo Dawn
Ash19256 chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
While I approve of the story itself, I have one complaint.

IT. IS. TOO. SHORT.
Tsamoka chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
Is this story going to be continued?
F-14 Tomcat Lover chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
Then the sensors detect incoming and the Bolo rolls to war.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
Type your review here...
Axel chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
Anyone else notice that most bolo fics are really short? Bolo appears, slaughterfies everyone, the end :D
Axel chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
Anyone else notice that most bolo fics are really short? Bolo appears, slaughterfies everyone, the end :D
cklammer chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
Nice start.
Archon of Darkness chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Now this is a story the likes of which I've never seen. I'm keeping an eye on this one.
archiev chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
I hope there's more. Would hate for a good story to end here.
Just a Crazy-Man chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
Nice...
Bolo Toothless MarkXXXlll chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
oh nice me want more

but i know a think or two about BOLO and the Mark XXXlll most of all

including the fact that they have repair system anD Repair Nanites, that i'm sure could repair the knid of damage your Bolo has, and normally the Bolos will have the full-numbers-and-all name and a kind of nikname as you could call it, like Hector, Shiva, or Chains(yes there is a Chains) and the bolo's long name is like the bar code (i mean you don't use thinks like 192341 for a apple do you) and a call the short and if you see the bolo Bolo XXXIII/D-1005-JNE is name Jenny or the Unit Two-Three-Baker-Zero-Zero-Seven-Five NKE, see the 3 letters there, they are part of what you can call the bolo's ID name but they also normally have something to do with it's (as you can call it) main name,

and the Mark XXXIII can pull the H in H2O for you know what with out need of a Bolo Depot but i think it may for other systems need resupply and the MKXXXIII is able to live through a nuke drop right on its top with not much trouble, and the only really affective weapon against its armor alone is a Hellbore not adding in the battle screens and other defences

soooo i think any of the whatever you called them GL whatever (i mostly play Zero Hour so sorry for not being up to date on this stuff) have even if they have a lazorof some kind i am pretty sure nothing they have can even move one big enough to even screach the Bolo's armor, late alone the lazer and its power souces, so i think any the LINE OF THE DAY is - OH SHIT

LOLOOLOLO:OLOLOOL
ShadowCub chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Oh yeah!
Mackon chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
Poor lonely Bolo's ... make such great stories.
JIM7 TeNderLoin chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
Well, this makes for a fair 'chapter one'. Now, is the rest of the story on its way?

I hope so!

:)))
OrionTheHunter chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
Great! Thanks for writing.
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