|Reviews for Flesh & Blood|
| silver drip chapter 5 . 5/19/2011
Very intense. Nice chapter ending.
| gredelina1 chapter 19 . 5/17/2011
I finally get Jasper's POV and now I find myself struggling to form words to leave a proper review. This chapter was so emotionally draining that I feel exhausted, which is a sign that it was very very good. I might not be Alice's biggest fan but Jasper having to kill her was heartbreaking. I'm worried sick about Carlisle being bitten. He can't be, can he? He's the only one that stands a chance to come up with a cure to this mess.
Emmett was the one that was immune? I wonder though if it's something in him or if it was due to the venom Jasper injected when he bit him? If it was Jasper's venom then Bella should at least be safe from turning into a zombie...the irony of her going through all that she has and now changing into a vampire, only to later become a zombie would be too much and I have faith that even you wouldn't be that cruel. ;)
Bella recognizing Rose's scent was a good sign and I hope that means that she'll be somewhat okay after the change. Of course she'll be traumatized, but she won't be as bad as in 'Decay', right? The title of this chapter did not escape me, but I'm choosing to ignore the similarities in Bella's frame of mind at the time of her change and instead I'm convincing myself that the title refered to the decay of those infected, and being the product of two authors with evil minds...
I'm slightly concerned that it's been so long since you've updated the story, but I'm holding on to HH's words of not abandoning it. I want to thank you both for taking the time and effort to give us such an amazing story. I knew that the combination of your individually twisted minds would lead to something extraordinary! Love you! *gives you both supporting hugs and sloppy kisses* I don't know you well enough Izzy, but I know HH enough to throw in some ass groping too. If you don't approve Izzy, take it out on your crazy co-writer! ;)
| gredelina1 chapter 18 . 5/17/2011
Oookay...well that answered some questions and opened up even more... Billy always blaming everything on 'the blodsuckers' usually pisses me off, but now it is actually their fault so I have to agree with him. If Edward hadn't been so 'Edward' and Carlisle hadn't loved his son and research so much none of this would have happened.
| gredelina1 chapter 17 . 5/17/2011
I felt really bad for deputy Mark there and then it turned out to be Emmett he shot. Brilliant! Still feel bad for the deputy though. It can't be easy to have to kill your friends and neighbours, especially when you've vowed to protect them.
| gredelina1 chapter 16 . 5/17/2011
Has it spread to La Push? How does it affect the wolves? Does the Volturi know about it and the link to Carlisle's research? I have so many questions and I'm definitely loving this story!
| gredelina1 chapter 15 . 5/17/2011
I'm loving these little glimpses into different people's POV's even though I'm desperate for some Jasper! The janitor's first thought when he saw the blood was so very human. It showed that he was in a work frame of mind and of course he would think of how much it would suck to clean it up. ;)
| gredelina1 chapter 14 . 5/17/2011
I don't know what was most disturbing about this chapter...the thought of Mrs. Cope and BOB, Alice being there to eat the sexually starved lady or the principal getting it on with Jessica's mom on a regular basis...in his office no less! Mrs. Cope calling Carlisle 'Dr. Sexybottom' was oddly enough not disturbing but hilarious and quite understandable! ;)
| gredelina1 chapter 13 . 5/17/2011
Patient six is Esme? Thank god Carlisle's not been bitten or all hope would be gone. Even though some of the details of his research were absolutely disgusting it was still riveting. Extremely interesting and very scientific! It seems there might be hope for Edward and possibly for Charlie but Alice is a gonner? Edward's been seen seeking sexual release? What exactly did he do? Or who? *snickers* Someone's immune to the zombies? Is it Jasper with all of his trace amounts of different venoms from the wars? This story is so intriguing and I'm kicking myself for not reading it until now!
| gredelina1 chapter 12 . 5/17/2011
Was not expecting Ben's POV, but I loved it! I loved the way you wrote the relationship between him and Angela and how she intuitively knew what he was thinking. Ben's love for martial arts and zombie movies came in handy and the fact that he gave Angela a katana for her birthday was both sweet and funny. It's a good thing she loves him so much as I'm sure it wasn't exactly the gift she wished for. ;)
'The Zombie Militia' - LOL. Even in life or death situations Emmett can find a way to make you smile. At least I know that the three of them were still okay in the beginning of the outbreak, but I have to wonder why they didn't go back for Bella. Does something happen to them or did they think that she was safer where she was?
The way you wrote the 'Militia' with cargopants, sniper positions, guns and cigarettes... Is it totally wrong that I find that hot as hell? Then you go and give Jasper the katana, and holy shit, I may spontaneously combust from that image combined with the description of him exuding badass from his pores! *wipes drool from chin*
| gredelina1 chapter 11 . 5/17/2011
Oh god, oh god, oh god... Venom can heal broken ear drums and fried eye balls, right? Jasper, get your hot ass over there and do something dammit!
| gredelina1 chapter 10 . 5/17/2011
Oh god... Where the hell are the cavarly?
| gredelina1 chapter 9 . 5/17/2011
I really like the way you're writing this. By using the letter form you add so much emotion to the story with just a few words. Brilliant!
| gredelina1 chapter 8 . 5/17/2011
Stubborn bastards keep banging and moaning...move on! You're obviously not going to get in to eat the tasty human so go on and find someone else to munch on! Guess the putrification isn't conducive to making any sort of thoughtout decisions...;)
| gredelina1 chapter 7 . 5/17/2011
She's going to go insane, isn't she? Where the hell are Rose? Please don't tell me she's infected too?
| gredelina1 chapter 6 . 5/17/2011
Now you're moving on from horror to heartache...the goodbye letter...beautiful. Bella feeling the need to remind Renée to pay the bills and stuff, even in what might be her last words to her mother, spoke volumes about their relationship. Her words to Emmett made me almost cry. The love between them is so amazing. Her words to Jasper were bittersweet. Is she ever going to get the chance to get to know him? I'm telling myself that, yes, she will get to know him seeing as this is a Bella/Jasper story and she will love him, but NOT as a brother...I'm holding on to that thought and I'm trusting you to give me a HEA.