Reviews for Akatsuki Girl Trouble
Aaliyah Taylor chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
Omg, I LOVED that story. I like stories with lemons, but Omg that was the best I've ever read! Thank for that story!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
I loved it *-*
Wierdo0101 chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Great story!
The-Always-Angel chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
Great, un!
Kouya-kun chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
i dont know what those other two dudes were talking about with the whole 'words were missing' and 'there were grammar mistakes' crap, cause the story looked fine to me. i really like this, which is saying something because i actually don't really like one shots usually. but this was awesome, and hope you can keep up the good work!
quickwing23 chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
I'm not quite sure what's going on, as there are words missing throughout the whole story. There were times I could make sense of it, but actual details are hazy. You might want to check it over?
lyra13x7 chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
i loved the idea, but it was kinnda hard to understand what you were saying because of grammar mistacks. i still read it, witch speaks wonders of the awesomeness of the storry itself. but i think you should try to fix it up a bit. sorry for the negativeity, continue writing plz!