Reviews for The First
Gracfully chapter 11 . 11/10/2014
:)
WhyWouldITellYou chapter 11 . 1/18/2014
I love Riddick and Vaako's fights but Takkari and Vakko's fights are Hilarious!
mel chapter 11 . 7/28/2013
please update soon
rya-fire1 chapter 11 . 7/23/2012
Do i sense a possible Vesarga/Vaako? It is interesting to see Riddick assume the loving partner role even if it is a little OOC for him. all-in-all pretty good story. keep it up.
Nelle07 chapter 11 . 4/12/2012
Love it! :)
TwilightMelodic chapter 11 . 4/6/2012
please update soon i love the story
JadeObsession chapter 11 . 2/4/2012
i hope there's more soonish?
tharaman chapter 11 . 1/27/2012
good job on this story, but i think it could be a little bit better. it just seems to be moving slightly slowly for a story with Riddick in it. I do like the direction you are going in, but its just somewhat offputting reading a story with Riddick in it moving along so slowly. still, good job Seraphim, good job. im looking forward to the next chapter. applause from Tharaman, keep writing
poisedrose chapter 10 . 9/7/2011
I love this story :D
Hearns chapter 10 . 7/14/2011
More, more.
CatyCrisis chapter 10 . 7/14/2011
-rolls on floor laughing my ass off- That last part was too funny xD.

This has to be my most favorite of Vakko yet! You've made him laid back and friendly and I like that a lot.
Lyric Dreams chapter 10 . 7/12/2011
hi, like it so far. please write more. tanks
Emzy2k11 chapter 10 . 7/2/2011
Haha! Lmao that was so funny i like how vaako is in this chapter hes more relaxed and he can crack a joke please update soon :)
Emzy2k11 chapter 10 . 7/2/2011
Haha! Lmao that was so funny i like how vaako is in this chapter hes more relaxed and he can crack a joke please update soon :)
TV appreciator chapter 10 . 6/25/2011
I like the story Seraphim. Thanks for the update! I'm eager to read more. :-)
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