Reviews for Hikaru Land
claraowl chapter 10 . 6/3/2014
That was mildly interesting, but can use a lot of work.
Silversun XD chapter 10 . 3/22/2014
go hikaru! XD

please update! XD
Guest chapter 7 . 2/18/2014
Lol kyoko is hilarious how dense she is n poor Hikaru he doesn't have a clue can't wait to what the president really wants with ren n its time for ren to move on his feelings for kyoko what yashiro told him is coming true can't wait for next chapter update asap
Silversun XD chapter 7 . 2/18/2014
please update! XD
Silversun XD chapter 6 . 2/16/2014
please update! XD

but this is a kyoko and hikaru pairing isn't it? where is hikaru?
Guest chapter 6 . 2/15/2014
I love it, will cain/ren do a rap or a song n setsu/kyoko his partner in crime maybe a duet hum Ja crazy in love orGo way back temptations n the supreme marvin gay Everly brothers, my boy friends back ,Kelly and Nelly dilemma, bring me back to life evanescen,Celine Dion R Kelly,Mary J Blige and U2 one, pink& nate reuss just give me a reason, Alicia Keys & Usher Rihanna and neyo Marc Anthony and Tina are our notesJordin Sparks and Chris Brown Jennifer Lopez in LL Cool J all I havejust a few things that you can use
Guest chapter 3 . 11/12/2013
Sorry to hear about your illness praying all goes well with your recovery, and to let you know I was enjoying your fan fic you've done a great job on it sorry you wont be completing it feel better soon a fan
Lineve chapter 3 . 11/10/2013
no te preocupes sempai
Yo esperare pasientemente por su historia, deseo su rehabilitacion
Danger All Around chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Ooh; A Hikaru-challenge withing the Hikaru-challenge. Well played.
Lucyole chapter 2 . 10/31/2012
but please dont make a ren kyoko story out of it in the end i like the
hikaru kyoko couple thingy here your story is interesting and good please write the next chapter
okami no kidzukare chapter 2 . 2/12/2011
This is interesting, I'm really curious to find out what will happen next.
Piacine chapter 2 . 1/15/2011
.Mistakes. But I dont really mind them :P
Anna Nimity chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
Please use punctuation.
SweetSarah8 chapter 2 . 1/10/2011
I'm glad to see you took up the Hikaru challenge. I look forward to your next chapter.
leavesfallingup chapter 2 . 1/10/2011
Hi, an interesting chapter.

I get the feeling that you typed it in a hurry. First of all, all of your "I"'s are capitalized, even within words (computer glitch?).

Second, you might want to read through your chapter. There are several confusing sentences.

One spelling error in particular "towels and bowels": did you mean bowls?

Your writing is usually much cleaner, so I assume that you rushed a little. All of that aside, it was a nice chapter and I am looking forward to the last three chapters (assuming that you're going to stay within the boundaries of the challenge).
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