|Reviews for And it was Christmas|
| earth17 chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
This was very sweet. I loved it.
| Neftzer chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Fra: You seriously rock.
I would usually be against a story that begins with an unlocated quotation. But I actually like this one. It conveys a lot of emotion and locates us with the children (if not the exact time and place we are in). And starting w/ the children puts readers on their side, ergo Robin must also work to convince *us*.
Way to go w/ the in-his-head thoughts! I liked them very much!
The dialogue is very good. You seem to have an ear for the rhythms of Robin and Marian. You've made what they have to say 'spiced' with their character, as well as being informative and moving the story along!
The plot had the feel to me of a sort of Christmas pageant-like occasion (kids getting together to put on a show/do something public for Christmas), and I'm ever a sucker for that...And I must applaud your giving Robin (even a decade or more before the show begins) already the hunger to both help others and formulate one of his 'plans'.
All-in-all, this was admirably done. :)
| annabel19 chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
It's a very lovely story! And I will never get bored to see Robin jealous !
| FireSpringRoses chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
Sweet! Very sweet!
| Bookworm41 chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
You did an excellent job with this story. I hope you had a Merry Christmas.