|Reviews for Tender Oblivion|
| Amicampus chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
| Lyaksandra chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Really nice thing you did here.
A bit to correct here:
"hasn't changed a bit" it should be had not, or hadn't
The story is very heart-wrenching, so hopefully you will find the inspiration to either continue it with a happier note or write something else with a happier theme.
Either way, hopefully there will be more from you to be read.