|Reviews for Saffron Moon|
| shugokage chapter 2 . 6/30/2012
This is a really incredible piece of work so thanks!
| dragonsofthe8elements chapter 2 . 3/1/2012
i am really enjoying this story.
| Meneldur chapter 2 . 10/24/2011
Beautiful. Simply radiant.
There is too little of Sabrina fanfiction out there, and that is amazingly sad. Luckily though, what little there is is usually at the high level which befits Sabrina. Your writing stands at this level, and it is simply enchanting. Sabrina's parents were quite amusing, and I wonder what they will truly think of this.
I love the idea of Mewtwo as a teacher and as jealous of Sabrina's current consort. You portray both Sabrina and Mewtwo with perfection, and together, they form an amazing relationship, which I would love to see more of. I hope you will find it within yourself to update again before the year is out.
| sulfur angel chapter 2 . 4/18/2011
This is an intriguing story, yes. I am intrigued, and wish to know what Mewtwo will do in order to fulfill his newfound "mission".
| Meriah chapter 2 . 3/26/2011
Aww... this is so fluffy. It warms my soul on an otherwise freezing day in Michigan. Thank you for this piece, and I look forward to the next chapter as always.
I must note, though, that it seems odd of Sabrina to have kissed Mewtwo so quickly. It just doesn't seem like her, but I do understand that her behavior works in the context of this story.
| Shinymonkey8 chapter 2 . 3/22/2011
God you are such a good writer.
This story just makes me happy. Vivid descriptions as always, I'm interested as to where this will go.
Write more soon!
| Mai-danishgirl chapter 2 . 2/25/2011
Nice and fluffy, just as the first, and fluffy is great on a rainy day.
And I can just hear Mewtwo say Pea...cock XD
| poka chapter 2 . 2/24/2011
Hahahaha... damn that was good. Sorry I din't review earlier btw.
| Mai-danishgirl chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
Hi, nice to see something new from you, I thought you were busy redoing Angelic Shadows. :)
Now, this seems nice and fluffy, and reading it was like eating a nice creamy piece of chocolate, nothing grand or vivid, but something you curl up with and feel immensly pleased with.
And that library? Sounds dreamy.
| Meriah chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
I know you're thoughtful when choosing names, so I looked up the definition of Kurosawa. Apparently it means "black swamp". Interesting choice for a name - I take it that it's meant to be associated with marshes, as in the Marsh Badge. Clever idea!
I like that you detailed all the grounds of the library. It sounds gigantic, and I could spend all of my life there! I would find myself trying to break into the seventh floor due to my obsession with ancient literature, and I'd take the opportunity to steal a copy of the Bhagavad-Gita (I have to buy that, along with six other books, for my Eastern religions course). But anyway, I've always been impressed by the attention you give to scenery and settings. That's often neglected by writers because I guess the process is considered tedious, but believe me, it's delightful to read. You're so talented in expressing even the simplest of things. I love that about you!
The line "those who loved the ensemble of silent voices, who savored the smell of pages and ink, those were the people she found alluring" is attractive and enticing. Once again, Abby, you've captured the beauty in writing. You're a painter of words. I'm really drawn to that line.
Sabrina sounds gorgeous in this piece. I can clearly understand why Mewtwo is instantly drawn to her. She possesses a powerful heart, a mysterious soul, an aura of eons so long ago mixed with the mists of today. Ultimately, she is someone who longs for companionship after being branded an outcast. She is a lot like Mewtwo in those ways. In fact, I can say that they are essentially reflections of each other. And how is it that you always manage to make Sabrina sound so damn magnificent? I can't bring that out in her! XD By the way, I adore the part in which you compare her to either a succubus or a siren. Both mythological creatures suit her perfectly.
The meeting between Sabrina and Mewtwo is charming. I can easily picture that in my mind, and it brings a smile to my lips (that's a big compliment - I am KNOWN for never smiling). You truly are among the few individuals who can express the chemistry between the two famed psychics, and I am so happy about that. I love that pairing almost as much as you do.
And damn... Mewtwo's human form sounds sexy! I hate to be so frank, but yes, I wouldn't mind him walking me home... and to the door... and coming inside... and following me upstairs...and yeah, LOL. Okay, I know I just totally overstepped my boundaries and the sweet factor to the scene. Forgive me. Point I’m getting to is this: It’s very charming of him to be a respectful gentleman to Sabrina, and it sure helps that he is described as handsome.
Anyway, fantastic start to what promises to be a lighthearted, well-developed, and ultimately enjoyable read. Thank you so much for writing this, my friend.
And aha! I knew that you were shouting out to "Ascension!" :D