|Reviews for The Hidden Heritage Part 1 Chapter 1|
| MissCHSparkles chapter 11 . 3/9/2012
I'm really enjoy this story but a few of these chapters could do with an edit as the format is a bit difficult to read. The story is squashed into one half of the page. Would you be able to fix this as it would make the story even better when it's easier to read. Thanks.
| Jay chapter 24 . 1/13/2008
you should continue this story. i loved the show when i was younger.
| anon chapter 24 . 9/29/2007
Moo Mesa fic? YES YES YES YES YES YES!
| Stormyrose chapter 24 . 6/12/2006
You don't know how excited I was to find a Cow Boys of Moo Mesa fanfic! And it's actually a good one, too.
Please continue writing, you have a great talent for it!
| Greatest Dragon Defender chapter 23 . 12/19/2005
Great chapter. ;) Whew! I'm relieved Terrorbull isn't Bessie's fiance, I'm more than sure that Boothill & Saddlesore were behind the masks at the stagecoach robbery. Oh yeah, sorry to hear about what happened to Moo's dad. But keep up the good work.
| Doppleganger33 chapter 23 . 6/5/2005
Oh very interesting, very interesting indeed. I like how you set it up to show that the Masked Bull killed Moo's Father. And I'd also imagine Miss Lily is right steaming that Moo's in that town looking for Bessie. Heheh.
It would seem the old "Wild West Cowboys of Moo Mesa " group was deleted. Since I knew you were a member thought I'd let you know. Here is another group dedicated to the show (it's an RPG but I don't think the owner would mind some discussion of the show).
| Greatest Dragon Defender chapter 22 . 12/28/2004
This fic is really good, write more soon. I just rented that ep. yesterday, it's really good. There's a Wild West C.O.W. Boys of Moo Mesa group? Do tell.
| Doppleganger33 chapter 22 . 11/2/2004
That was a cool chapter. One quick suggestion. You might want to watch your spelling.
| Doppleganger33 chapter 21 . 9/21/2004
I like the continuation. So this Bessie had a thing for Moo but he likes Ms. Lily. Very interesting. Could we see a triangle perhaps?
| Sara chapter 20 . 9/10/2004
Aw man, this fic is awesome. I love the C.O.W. Boys! Plus, great job on the characters. Can't wait to see what happens next.
| Aowyn the Ranger chapter 1 . 8/6/2004
i have not heard a wisper of the series for at least 10 years ! give me an e mail of how you see the episods i loved the cartoon when i was little
| Jodi chapter 17 . 3/7/2004
This is awesome. I'm anxious for the next chpt.
| Doppleganger33 chapter 17 . 1/28/2004
Nice addition. It's great to see this story alive and strong.
| Doppleganger33 chapter 16 . 12/19/2003
Oh wow. Great story. I like the elements you put into your story, the romance, the mystery, the cookies. Looks like the romance with Moo/Ms. Lily seems to be progressing very nicely. I wonder why JR became a human. Does that the bulls were descended from humans. Maybe they are mutants. Anyways interesting story.
| Pompey chapter 14 . 7/28/2003
Hey, a new chapter! Yay!
That's putting the mayor in his place. Could this new visitor be a concerned young heifer with an eye for Moo?