Reviews for What if
dewman1208 chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
This brief, yet nominal dialogue between Assumpta and Peter is great. I t manages to create a much more satisfying conclusion to this dramatic scene.
AngieK of Gallifrey chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
Yea! I always hated how he said "I'm a priest" since he's the one who started the thing in the car. Nice change, very sweet!
MeadeBallyK chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
I can see it happen the way you have written it and you did such a good job with it. Please continue...can't wait but must.
Sarah7293 chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
What a nice surprise to find this after 3 hours of homework!

It was a lovely read! I had to do my own share of wiping my eyes, and I'm not embarrassed to admit it :)

Excellent - that should have been *exactly* what happened!
stormy52 chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
Great story. So glad to see you take that episode in this direction. Looking forward to more.
McCork chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Lovely touch to this episode! How delightful that you plan to add to this story - quite looking forward to all your work!