Reviews for Make A Wish
Darksideshortfuse chapter 17 . 4/19
Very nice and sweet story, thank you for sharing
Elindina chapter 17 . 8/31/2024
Damn man you really got me screaming and crying in the club right now. I always figured there was a chance for them to wish Bulma back to earth, but I never imagined Vegeta would get left behind. And when they were so close to escaping together! Damn Bulma jist wish your man back

Anyway, this was so beautifully written. I love the slow progression in Bulma and Vegetas relationship. Gonna dry my tears now and go read the sequel 3
Kamisama97 chapter 17 . 8/21/2024
Thanks for write!
Poxolin chapter 9 . 5/18/2024
A
SpringtrapVegeta chapter 1 . 9/4/2023
I can't wait to read part two!
SpringtrapVegeta chapter 17 . 9/4/2023
I loved the story, it was great, one of the best I've read, the only thing I didn't like was the ending, I hope that the next sequel I like the ending more.
VegetaMyBabyDaddy chapter 17 . 8/14/2023
Cute story I really enjoyed it can't wait to read part 2!
Geurtg chapter 1 . 12/20/2022
Buena historia
Protos Heis chapter 17 . 7/19/2022
I think this chapter should belong to the sequel instead.
Protos Heis chapter 16 . 7/19/2022
Beautiful story but I can't say much about the ending. I guess I feel betrayed. I didn't expect it would turn out like that.

I have to be honest with you. You should minimize your a/n. It's kind of annoying reading it and I'm sure there are others who agree with me.
Protos Heis chapter 15 . 7/19/2022
Am I the only one who wishes Bulma would tell Vegeta about the Dragon Balls?
Protos Heis chapter 14 . 7/19/2022
It's so sweet how they both shared the same "first kiss!" Although, I really prefer the "not-virgin Vegeta. I just don't like the idea of Vegeta not having experience whatsoever. After a lot of fanfics that I read, a very experienced Vegeta seems so hot and knows how to please Bulma well.
Protos Heis chapter 13 . 7/19/2022
Told you it was Raditz! I knew it was him since the last scene in chapter 12!
Protos Heis chapter 12 . 7/19/2022
If it was Raditz who just arrived, I don't think there's anything Vegeta to worry about since he's far stronger.
Protos Heis chapter 11 . 7/18/2022
Poor Bulma. This is probably the first gruesome sight she has ever seen. It didn't help the way Vegeta treated her either.
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