Reviews for Make A Wish |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice and sweet story, thank you for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn man you really got me screaming and crying in the club right now. I always figured there was a chance for them to wish Bulma back to earth, but I never imagined Vegeta would get left behind. And when they were so close to escaping together! Damn Bulma jist wish your man back Anyway, this was so beautifully written. I love the slow progression in Bulma and Vegetas relationship. Gonna dry my tears now and go read the sequel 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for write! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait to read part two! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the story, it was great, one of the best I've read, the only thing I didn't like was the ending, I hope that the next sequel I like the ending more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story I really enjoyed it can't wait to read part 2! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Buena historia |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think this chapter should belong to the sequel instead. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful story but I can't say much about the ending. I guess I feel betrayed. I didn't expect it would turn out like that. I have to be honest with you. You should minimize your a/n. It's kind of annoying reading it and I'm sure there are others who agree with me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Am I the only one who wishes Bulma would tell Vegeta about the Dragon Balls? |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's so sweet how they both shared the same "first kiss!" Although, I really prefer the "not-virgin Vegeta. I just don't like the idea of Vegeta not having experience whatsoever. After a lot of fanfics that I read, a very experienced Vegeta seems so hot and knows how to please Bulma well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Told you it was Raditz! I knew it was him since the last scene in chapter 12! |
![]() ![]() ![]() If it was Raditz who just arrived, I don't think there's anything Vegeta to worry about since he's far stronger. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Bulma. This is probably the first gruesome sight she has ever seen. It didn't help the way Vegeta treated her either. |