|Reviews for Make A Wish|
| Many Voices chapter 17 . 7/19
I'm sure you're a little shocked seeing a flood of reviews on a 10 year old fic. This brings me just as much joy now as it did when I first found it. It takes me right back to the time when I was first reading this. I hope this brings back fond memories for you as well. This is one of those fics that I will never forget.
| Many Voices chapter 16 . 7/19
I remember the whiplash from this chapter. I remember it all making sense later. The pain is still the same though the whiplash is less.
| Many Voices chapter 15 . 7/19
Bulma is very lucky that Vegeta is a much better liar than she is.
| Many Voices chapter 14 . 7/19
And just like that the tension snaps. I have to remind myself these are teenagers and not the adults of DBZ.
| Many Voices chapter 13 . 7/19
Between this and Aftershocks, you turn Raditz into a fun character. I really do enjoy it.
| Many Voices chapter 12 . 7/19
Raditz brought a sense of impending doom the first read through just as much as he does now.
| Many Voices chapter 11 . 7/19
And here we meet the poor locals. The suspense here for those that know what's inevitably coming is so intense. Beautifully done.
| Many Voices chapter 10 . 7/19
One day Vegeta will learn not to underestimate Bulma. I will say this fic has aged well. It soothes that nostalgic craving I had.
| Many Voices chapter 9 . 7/19
I forgot how much I loved this scene. How many times my head met the desk waiting for Bulma to figure it out. Vegeta keeping tabs on her through the scouter is very cute.
| Many Voices chapter 8 . 7/19
This is where we remember the radar is with the boys on Earth. The boys that are going to ruin a good thing by the end of this. The trust being built here is something I am so glad you took the time to develop. These two stubborn idiots need this time.
| Many Voices chapter 6 . 7/19
I should be working, yet, I'm reading this. Fun times. I love seeing these two crack and begin to care about each other. Feelings are such fun things.
| Many Voices chapter 5 . 7/19
And so begins the slow build of Vegeta caring. Reading this again is like coming home. I very much enjoy it.
| Many Voices chapter 4 . 7/19
I'm back. I had craving for a an old, comforting fic, and this is where I came. I still love the phrasing of the wish that got us here. Vegeta being so perplexed by a female has me living.
| RoyalBlueRoses chapter 17 . 4/6
Great story! read it in 2 days. I really loved it and I'm excited to read the sequel
| alulaa chapter 17 . 11/23/2020
I’ve read this fic in Spanish. I really liked it! I’d love to read the second part. Thanks a lot!