Very nice and sweet story, thank you for sharing

Damn man you really got me screaming and crying in the club right now. I always figured there was a chance for them to wish Bulma back to earth, but I never imagined Vegeta would get left behind. And when they were so close to escaping together! Damn Bulma jist wish your man back

Anyway, this was so beautifully written. I love the slow progression in Bulma and Vegetas relationship. Gonna dry my tears now and go read the sequel 3

Thanks for write!

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I can't wait to read part two!

I loved the story, it was great, one of the best I've read, the only thing I didn't like was the ending, I hope that the next sequel I like the ending more.

Cute story I really enjoyed it can't wait to read part 2!

Buena historia

I think this chapter should belong to the sequel instead.

Beautiful story but I can't say much about the ending. I guess I feel betrayed. I didn't expect it would turn out like that.

I have to be honest with you. You should minimize your a/n. It's kind of annoying reading it and I'm sure there are others who agree with me.

Am I the only one who wishes Bulma would tell Vegeta about the Dragon Balls?

It's so sweet how they both shared the same "first kiss!" Although, I really prefer the "not-virgin Vegeta. I just don't like the idea of Vegeta not having experience whatsoever. After a lot of fanfics that I read, a very experienced Vegeta seems so hot and knows how to please Bulma well.

Told you it was Raditz! I knew it was him since the last scene in chapter 12!

If it was Raditz who just arrived, I don't think there's anything Vegeta to worry about since he's far stronger.

Poor Bulma. This is probably the first gruesome sight she has ever seen. It didn't help the way Vegeta treated her either.