|Reviews for Make A Wish|
| Geurtg chapter 1 . 12/20/2022
| Protos Heis chapter 17 . 7/19/2022
I think this chapter should belong to the sequel instead.
| Protos Heis chapter 16 . 7/19/2022
Beautiful story but I can't say much about the ending. I guess I feel betrayed. I didn't expect it would turn out like that.
I have to be honest with you. You should minimize your a/n. It's kind of annoying reading it and I'm sure there are others who agree with me.
| Protos Heis chapter 15 . 7/19/2022
Am I the only one who wishes Bulma would tell Vegeta about the Dragon Balls?
| Protos Heis chapter 14 . 7/19/2022
It's so sweet how they both shared the same "first kiss!" Although, I really prefer the "not-virgin Vegeta. I just don't like the idea of Vegeta not having experience whatsoever. After a lot of fanfics that I read, a very experienced Vegeta seems so hot and knows how to please Bulma well.
| Protos Heis chapter 13 . 7/19/2022
Told you it was Raditz! I knew it was him since the last scene in chapter 12!
| Protos Heis chapter 12 . 7/19/2022
If it was Raditz who just arrived, I don't think there's anything Vegeta to worry about since he's far stronger.
| Protos Heis chapter 11 . 7/18/2022
Poor Bulma. This is probably the first gruesome sight she has ever seen. It didn't help the way Vegeta treated her either.
| Protos Heis chapter 10 . 7/18/2022
Vegeta sounded like he was worried about Bulma knowing what he and Nappa were doing on that planet.
| Protos Heis chapter 9 . 5/26/2022
It's gotta be Vegeta! There could be no one else. He must've sensed Bulma's ki drifting off and he went there to save her.
| Protos Heis chapter 8 . 5/26/2022
Nothing's more pleasing than to see Vegeta being possessive! I love how he didn't want to smell Zarbon's scent on her.
| Protos Heis chapter 7 . 5/25/2022
Wasn't Vegeta just a bit older than Bulma? The way you described Vegeta in Bulma's point of view as "the boy," you made it sound like Vegeta is just a little kid.
I like how Vegeta didn't deny that he's jealous.
| Protos Heis chapter 6 . 5/24/2022
I love how Vegeta seems to be the one who developed some feelings first!
The part where Bulma tended to Vegeta's wounds reminds me back in the canon when she took care of Vegeta.
| Protos Heis chapter 5 . 5/21/2022
Whenever it described how cold Zarbon's touch seemed to Bulma, I always got to picture him in his monster form! It's horrendous!
| Protos Heis chapter 4 . 5/20/2022
I actually thought that Saiyans should have their own language. I'll presume that English is the universal language and any literate creatures should know about it. That's how they all been able to communicate with each other.