Reviews for Beneath
Shirubagure chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
Aww so sad! D: it was good just a very sad sad ending. :(
csibpip chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
It was so...soft, light, smooth. I liked it.
Badee Badaa Doo chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
It's been a while since I cried.

Oh I'm going to remember this one for a long long time *goes and get a new tissue box*
InfiniteAnimeHolic chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
This is sad.. TT i love the way the story is written... Now im off to read more of your stories :D
AkatsukiMemberShadow chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
This was amazing... and sad ;_;

It reminds me of how tragic DGM could possibly get.

This story touched me in such a way that I cant explain.

Im literally sitting here, crying. And I never cry. Ever.

But I loved it. I don't think I'll forget it.

No-Nose-Necessary chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
this is beautiful. I stared at my computer 5 minutes after i finished the story crying. You did such an amazing job of portraying their emotions, and you know their personalities so well that I feel like I'm reading something Hoshino could've written! I feel this could have actually happened in the story, that's how real it was to me...
Uncolored-Heart chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
This was so sad, I could feel the emotion that Allen was feeling while reading this. Wow, Im holding back a couple tears because of this (that means its really good).
apocalypseHunter chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
This story touched me in such a way that I can't explain.

I'm literally sitting here, crying. And I never cry. Ever.

But I loved it. I don't think I'll forget it.
iLoveToSing chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
Awwww this is so tragically beautiful! T.T I love the emotions, and the way its written and just everything! DX Thank u for posting, i love it! T.T (And i almost never like super sad stories T.T) 3
Pearl of the Orient Seas chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
This was so...wonderfuly sad...

I almost cried...

That only shows how great you are...

I really pity Allen...

And I like the bond the 4 of them has :) This fic really broke my heart and I can say again, and again...

This is really a great fic.
Uniasus chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
I almost cried! Which is saying something, cuz I never cry and have a penchant for writing angst myself. I'm a manly-girl. Please, erase that image of someone tall and buff cuz it's totally false. Gah, lack of food is making me say funny things.

But yes, wonderful story. I like this style, never done it myself, but it somehow makes things feel more tangible.
artemis56567 chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
SOOO SAD yet SOOOO GOOD. Great job! :3
Dreamless Abyss chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
I'm not going to lie; this almost made me cry.

This is a very, very beautiful piece.
ThE HaPPyPsIcoGirL chapter 1 . 1/16/2011

I just love the way you put so much emotion in what you write.

Everything was beautiful,sad and heartbreaking.

I think Im becomming adicted to your stories so expect more comments because I'm gonna read all your DGM stories xD

dsa chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
this story was cry worthy
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