Reviews for The Return of Charles Evenson
Carlisle Fan 22 chapter 12 . 1/4
Nice work on this. I was a little unsure about this story at first, but as I keep reading it, I found I like it. Excellent work. Glad that jerkoff of an ex is gone for good.
sam chapter 11 . 10/5/2014
when esme was watching the kids dance and carilsle asked esme to dance and she said yes and the were danceing and singing to each other that was really cute and sweet also does charles ever come back and try to hurt her again?
sam chapter 10 . 10/5/2014
wow
sam chapter 9 . 10/5/2014
yayyyyyyyyy she hunting again she is feeling a lot better now but she still a little scared way to go carilsle helping her get better and out hunting again but one more question for esme when charles is a human again are you still a little scared of him
sam chapter 8 . 10/5/2014
how long do they wait
sam chapter 7 . 10/5/2014
wow that must been really scary for esme and carilsle but i got one little question for esme why didn''t she finish charles off she said she wanted to get a way from him why didn't she do it i mean she scared him a little cause he left
chronos-girl chapter 1 . 4/22/2014
I was wondering if Charles is stronger than Jane in the head screwing department because he shouldn't be able to affect Bella at all since her gift is a shield. I know it's a fiction so I'm giving it a chance but that little tidbit is sort of important for her character
seeyouagain chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
Bella is a mental sheild how is it that she was affected by his power .
Arianna Quezada chapter 12 . 9/25/2013
Very good job I am impressed it always kept me guessing thank you very much for creating this sad scary and funny story I will definitely be recommending to all of my friends
Cris.P.C chapter 12 . 6/17/2013
It was very nice x) I truly enjoyed it. :D I loved the ball, it was so great CX And I'm glad Esme got powers and it was shown how brave she really is. She's too underrated. :S
RbeccaE chapter 12 . 3/24/2013
i really liked this! Very cute :D
Cydney chapter 12 . 2/18/2013
Really really really good
Cydney dunham chapter 12 . 2/15/2013
This was really really good may be you could write a story between esme and the kids and carlisle
Guest chapter 6 . 12/11/2012
Esme and Carlisle seem a bit too...young in their relationship
Violet chapter 12 . 11/23/2012
That was a great story. Thank you :)
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