I just want to say
And i know how late this is
You cook ramen by pouring boiling water into the pot of ramen

Your story's pretty good it has much potential I I look for the reason more your fanfiction have a nice day

Rewriting this fic or continuing when can who knows.

I believe Naruto should learn about his parents sooner than cannon. I'm thinking maybe around exams. Also if you don't mind maybe you could have team 7 do the exams after a year of practice rather than in six months

I find it hard to believe that with akatsuki after Naruto they'd just let him run off by himself on a solo mission

I mean...I would like to say that having people fall all over in love/attraction with Naruto (and it seems like quite a few girls are) is rather unrealistic...but then the same thing happened with Sasuke. So. I guess while it's not unrealistic, I don't really like harem fics, as this seems to come across as one to me-but that's just a personal opinion. Otherwise, I think this story is taking some interesting turns! :)

I kind of think it was a good idea to have Haku die. Bc, as it's clearly shown, Naruto needed a catalyst to trigger his "protect ppl" mindset. Shame tho, because I was kind of getting into the pairing TT

You know this fanfiction kinda reminds me of Rewrite, if you know what I'm referring to.

Nimako?... Kunisha? You made Anko read porn based on his parents? That's soo cruel! Poor Naruto

Wait... where did Jiraiya get these details? Did he perv on them for research? Did the Sarutobi and Kakashi also read this book? They approved? Maybe they were too busy having nosebleeds.

Kya!~ It's Gaara! AHHHHHH! He is my favorite Naruto character. My first anime crush. WAH GAARA! Why? Why did you... sniffle. I was so sad when he... he... WAAAHHH!

I don't get it, Itachi already handed orochimaru his HEAD(I mean totally took him apart, with NO apparent effort), he's FAR more powerful then orochimaru, Kisamie is too for that matter. And the fact that orochi can't use jutsu because he has no arms (no they don't come back after switching bodies) So orochi in his new body SHOULDN'T hold a candle to either of them,

You know, I would think naruto would be getting a little tired of ignorant people and their stupid power-grab attempts WHEREVER he goes! Seriously, they seem to be ALL he ever deals with anymore! In fact, they're kinda all along the same lines... Evil dude wants more power then he's got, hires ninja to help him kill *insert name* and seize power in an obviously crude and all together easily seen through way (seriously shouldn't naruto be able to GUESS exactly what's going on and whom all the major players are the SECOND he steps foot wherever it's going on at currently, considering the sheer AMOUNT of times his seen the exact same situation) even the whole "sasuke retrieval" thing and gato are pretty much just repeat the same thing again.

I dont like when kyuubi have human form. So i will stop here.

If and when u get to the space sequel, please do outlaw star. That would be awesome.

why doesn't Kyuubi think the other Bijuu are capable of intelligent thought and conversation? We've already seen Hachibi and Nibi talking to Bee and Yugito, and Kyuubi has known her "siblings" for centuries, so she must know that they are sentient?