I have enjoyed this story up until this chapter 18 but now I believe I have truly found a gem and reading some of the authors notes I can already tell that all the cliches I do like are coming and the one I find cringe and ruin it are being avoided. This could quite possibly be one of my favorite stories I’ve ever read with how the story is going! Now I need to leave this here and keep reading!

Kubikiribocho? Isn't Zabuza still alive?

I thought you made Naruto smart in this fanfic? Yet he underestimated his opponent and lost because of it?

it's really sad how those first 16 chapters are nearly perfect, and then you had to throw it all away. The writing and storytelling was so rich, the themes were executed well, the pacing was on point (which is surprising for a naruto fanfiction story), and the characters (dynamics) were so complex. You also showcased a lot of self-awareness and understanding of the naruto fanfiction trops, subverting them in very fascinating twists and turns. I don't know if you just stopped giving a shit, or got worried that you were boring people who came for the lemons and parings, but this chapter took a 180 in an admittedly irritating fashion. Definitely one of the hardest letdowns I've experience on this app.

Looks interesting, bout to give it a try

tbh i love this kind of personality, though i wonder if he at some point gains some kind of coping mechanism to coop with the life of a shinobi like kakashi and his porn or something

tbh i almost cried

bruh this fanfic was pretty good until you started dishing out those boring ass fillers...

Harem no jutsu is definitely not used enough.

Lol Jiraiya wrote MinaKushi

Yugito and Matatabi in here remind me of Sakura and Inner Sakura wherein Sakura has a decent attitude lol

My heart can't take this. A forbidden love ugh please take away my heart like Kakashi did for Obito lol

It's not entirely bizarre that Naruto has some kind of bipolar disorder that's like both Minato and Kushina. I mean, I'm sometimes hyper like Kushina and the people around me are mostly shocked when I talk because sometimes something really deep and philosophical comes out of my mouth. Lol and I ain't drunk.

Naruto: enjoying time with Haku, feeling love for the first time in his life

Author, going to kill her for character development:

face it if he can steal the forbidden scroll and stop a chunin Level traitor he dose not need a clone just
to be a nuja