This story is fantastic but this question relates to "Devils Ninja" shouldn't you give Naruto a Familiar soon in the story because it is a requirement for every Devil regardless of rank to have one, and they can have more than one because Asia has two Dragons as her Familiars.

Reason's 1 and 4 are beyond enough to keep me in for the rest of the story. Make sure you finish this story, and hell you even though up challenges to get some of the sequels out ( reasons I speak of are the ones stated during the A/N on chapter 17)

Looks like Sasuke the emo, did it again. He's such a braggart is annoying. Well first it was him letting people pass, then Naruto helped people out. Of course Naruto did himself, but now they have a lot more people they have to beat.

Looks like temari and Yugito have it bad for Naruto, lol. I wonder how all that's going to work out once Naruto finds out about Suna attacking them?

Great chapter!

Err, I kind think Naruto was an idiot for getting so close with the enemy. If he kills Haku it's probably only going to haunt him later and screw with his mind, no?

Sakura as always is a waste of space. It always bothered me how Naruto let her get away with hitting and insulting him because of Sasuke. Although, I know in the future she trains with Tsunade I still think that someone else like Hinata could have trained with Tsunade and done much better than her.

I hope that Naruto isn't so close to Sasuke that he feels like he has to go and bring him back like in the canon, when/if he leaves. Sasuke defection is inevitable, since he has no ties to the village. I seriously think that Itachi screwed Sasuke up so much, that unless someone seriously beats the crap out of him or does something profound to actually get through to him, there's no way that stuck up teme is going anywhere good. He obviously doesn't see that revenge is best served cold. Honestly, like the third said Sasuke is mildly talented but expects everyone to cater to him rather than striking out on his own. I think in the canon Naruto could have done that much better if he actually had someone looking out for him and showing him how to train from a young age. He would have been able to surpass Sasuke's skills for sure.

This was a great chapter!

After reading, I had to wonder why in nine levels of did Jiraiya not join the mission? It involved Sasuke and Orochimaru, and from previous chapters Jiraiya did care about the curse seal.

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I think its' kind of annoying that Kakashi underestimated Naruto so much but I guess even in the canon he favored Sasuke more than not, even though he become a missing nin in the end.

I hope Naruto can improve in his skills, he's learning hell of a lot more from Anko than he ever did from Kakashi in the canon.

Great chapter!

Sounds interesting so far!

i like this story so far!
though i do think Naruto should forgive Jiraiya a little, i mean the man does love him and he is Naruto's only 'family' in a sense.

great chapter, but one question. Will he have a family in the sense that he will have kids? i mean is he not the last decedent of two clans?

just finished your 43 chapter, i really like your story (like the 7 other i read, the only one i didn't is Devil Ninja), just however that i was not really interested with the 2 last filler, it's might be because i'm biased with the naruto filler (i like 10 of them max). I'm eager to read the next chapter ( for all your stories ) so until your next one

Why did you say that bunishin was transform?

I knew it would happen but it didn't stop me from crying. you are really good, seriously. For me if a story is good only if it make me show what i feel for the character, and you did it.

You made me cry man that's just not cool. I know Haku's death will cause naruto to get stronger but its still sad . Your a great writer and now I'm going into a corner and cry in the fetal position.

I really did try to stick with the story after "sexy" famale kyubi thing, and after the whole half demon half human thing, but after the immortality i kinda lost are an awesome writer and I probably will look into reading some of your other works but those feature were kind of a turn off. I didn't really like the weeklong romance with Haku and the subsequent depression after she died but you made it work I guess. Also with everyone having eyes for Naruto it kinda looks like a potential Harem story, I don't know if you actually took it in that direction but I was never a fan of harem stories so that was kind of a turn off for me. Sakura hatred seemed a bit extreme to me, to the point where she looked really stupid but I guess you can chalk that up to her fan girl phase. Those were some of the things I personally didn't like about your stories, your creativity and writing are really good but I just didn't like the direction this was going and that just happened to be my personal opinion. There were things I did like about this story, I liked Kakashi and Naruto tentative relationship. The whole bit about Naruto thinking Kakashi liked him better because of the lateness excuse was really cute. I love smart Naruto stories, especially ones that don't make Naruto out to be this all powerful being because he knows how to utilize a few Jutsu correctly. I like a lot of other things but this review is already way too long for my likeing.