That gauntlet sounds amazing, gotta wait to see it in action.
And have I said how much I like Naruto's personality? I love him.

I knew it! Anko's a sister figure.

Nooo! I don't wanna read the next chp!

Wtf this is so painful! I hope this fight doesn't end in heartbreak.

I like Anko & Naruto's friendship

Mmm

Wearing combat boots as a shinobi doesn't make him look cool. It makes him look like a fuckwit and a dumbass... the shinobi sandal was designed and improved upon until it gave maximum support for the ankles and good traction all without interfering with mobility and allowing for walking techniques to be actually performed without fighting to cover the entire shoe. The open toes actually let the chakra bleed out and down to the sole of the sandal quickly and easily.

I just can not believe this! Earlier you were stating that you had a hard time getting Anko and Naruto together because of the age gap but now you’re saying that you’re planning on getting Naruto and Kurama together?! Seriously?! WTF! Kurama had lived for thousands of years! Hypocrite!

this chapter really did bring tears to my eyes in multiple scenes. im still crying. Sometimes if a author can evoke these types of feelings from readers it means they are a top notch writer. one of the best, if not the greatest.

Can you give us and the writer a break about Anko, Anko. She’s too old for Naruto. Write your own story if pedaphilia is your thing.

I believe the time had come for me to drop this story. I really don’t care for stories about Naruto becoming a half demon plus the total lack of Anko x Naruto and my frustration had reached its zenith. I know that you are the author but I am not trying to insult you just trying to help you understand why I will no longer follow your story.

Come ON! I told you that I want Anko and Naruto to be in LOVE! Not be a “ sibling “ love! Seriously though WTF!?

Well my only problem is that you tried to have Haku and Naruto in love. Other than that I think that this chapter is a good reminder about how hard life is being a ninja and why ninjas are not concerned about age. Life is full of tragedy in the ninja world.

Sigh since I didn’t mention this earlier I will mention it now. I strongly dislike gender swaps. But so many swap Haku it’s like trying to turn a flood with a twig. Please don’t tell me that Haku is the romantic partner you chose!? I’m sorry but I can’t accept that. Anko is the best partner for Naruto. And I guess that I am the only person who remembers that Haku is male. Sigh how troublesome to quote Shikamaru.

I wish I could be an author! There are so many scenarios that I want to see and can’t because of my lack of experience in crafting a story. I can appreciate a good story. I have read some fanfics that moved me as much as canon. Some few were even better. A couple actually did the impossible, they got me to feel different emotions other than rage and disdain for Sakura. I am enjoying your story and I can only offer you some tips which mainly consist of what I want to see. Well please continue with the story,