You said it woild be obvious about the ship and yet i see three obvious options now, tenten anko and haku, so which one is it?

I think it’s fucking pathetic, and you’re damned right it’s a cliched trope to make Naruto a hanyo or Kyubi a female. To be perfectly honest I’d rather have the massive mass of chakra to go through eternity with me. A monster becoming a big softy, is more appealing to me than a seductress in my gut. What use would she be as a humanoid female?
This started out as an interesting take on the tale of Naruto, and turned into nothing more than an adolescent, testosterone piece of trash.
I was already having doubts when you put Naruto in steel-toed boots, what use does Naruto have for these boots, other than to make his kicks hurt worse? That would be their only purpose, they have no other function in the world of Naruto. Have you ever worn steel-toed boots, and if so, how far have you walked in them? Do you have any idea how pain they are to jump in, new flash people land on their toes when they land after a jump.
Your story is pathetic and stupid,
Good Day!

Good story until... Kyubi chann I dropp it.

I know I'm late to the party but the death of Haku made me cry I don't know how you did it but seriously I'm getting watery eyes just thinking about it

You’re right, I hate is this chapter but it’s still a good story and I’m planning to continue reading it but really that sucks but you’re not wrong only someone who has experience pain can understand did not take life for granted and appreciate the small things in life

getting a bit annoyed with all the filler content that's being included here. sure it's basically pre written story content to fill up the 3 year training gap but it's all so inconsequential. Im not starting to appreciate the authors who just time skip the 3 years and then sparingly use some flashbacks to show any important developments that happened over the years away.

bro need to see a psychologist for all these flashback. obv got some issues he needs to sort out.

Really annoying how this story is advertised as just a few small changes from canon that makes Naruto stronger but by now it’s COMPLETELY AU. Like female kyuubi. Naruto’s not even human anymore?! Kumo at the chunin exams. And literally everything having to do with females. Not saying this story is bad. Just that it is so opposed to what it is advertised as….

uuugh. "Shousa Sasuke Uchiha" ... SERIOUSLY? it's fine to include the occasional "Baka" even if it's cringe just because people understand what that means, this though? it's both not a common word and there is no reason to have it in romaji Japanese (plus it's Shōsha, not shousa).

The Japanese (Romaji at least) is excessive. if you are going to immediately provide the English translation for everything why bother including all the Japanese. just go straight to English. It's admitted partially preference on my part, but the other half is just that it's clunky, it's this big long underlined name that's just a break in the story.

Not off to a great start.

Muai tai and a Bo Staff? he's like 4ft something and barely 100 pounds (probably less) so none of that is optimal for him. not to mention the silly clothes like a black cloak (in the middle of a forest, really?) and a headband that's so long the straps hand down to his rear along with Chakra metal bits which are supposed to be super expensive but he's just getting for free. This is "Bob Uchiha" levels of quality, and thats pretty low.

I can only hope it improves in later chapters because this isn't looking good.

Look focusing on the fighting is fun and all, but good lord Orochinmaru’s attack on the village is starting to feel like Goku vs. Freeza on namek lmao

The super sexualized nature of Naruto at the age of 12 ruined the immersion of the fic. Canon Naruto mocked everybody who even did the slightest thing perverted. This version of Naruto doesn’t mesh well with canon, regardless of any of your contrived circumstances.
Example: Having him stammer and be nervous around TenTen when he never would have done that in canon.
He hasn’t even gone through puberty so there’s no motivation to do the kind of stuff in this fic. Having him use his clones to have sex with each other is disgusting as well.

The final straw for the worst thing about this fic is female Kurama.
That is easily the trope that destroys a majority of Naruto fanfics. As soon as I see genderswapped Kurama, I know this is going to be a trash fic.

The romance in this story is extremely cringe. The love Naruto shared with Haku was beautiful, and her death actually brought tears to my eyes. But afterwards, it all went to shit.

Great fic 10/10