I don't know if this is your own account on web novel but I thought I should inform you that this story appeared about one month ago on this site. ( book/naruto-shifts-in-life_24224781405867605)

This story had a good amount of cliches but I still really enjoyed it

Pointless filler

I never leave comments but this time I have to I cried so much and I hate you for killing hall but I understand it but it still hurts I’m loving this so far though

This was your most boring story and the pairings dissapointing but overall was a nice cliche to read.

Sakura is WAY creepier then Kakashi... And he reads poor in public.

Fuck... dammit! This chap hurts a lot

I really like your story. I hope you are still writing stuff

there's a copy of this story on webnovel just letting you know

Ever since Kyuubi got introduced, i feel like something's been horribly off with the story. i can't put it in words, it just feels, contradicting? Like Sarutobi in canon Naruto is the peak of contradiction, but the changes in Naruto since Kyuubi got introduced in full a few chapters ago, somehow made reading this fic any further alittle unbearable. Example, Author-san made Naruto into a smartass, infact, Naruto has been shown to have intellect rivalling even Nara's with his deductions and etc. Problem is, in this chapter 21, when he is with Tenten, he talks about how Kyuubi is a S-rank secret, yet he also knows that COMMON VILLAGERS know about said secret. Naruto's been able to put 2 and 2 together for much more complex issues, yet he isnt able to connect the dots that something ain't right with how the COMMONERS know about said S-RANK SECRET? Another issue that will likely make me stop reading this fic after this feedback is the way Naruto treats the Kyuubi. call me Cliche or stupid or shortsighted, but Naruto just casually shifting the blame of what happened to him to Kyuubi after she's been revealed, just felt so off with how Naruto has been built as a character in this fic. It's almost like all his prior character development just got thrown straight out the wazoo and into the gutter, in favor of Naruto lashing out at Kyuubi like he did. Another issue i find with how this fic turned out to be is all the unnecessary explanations and info dumps. i've been skipping large portions of almost every chapter because there's like dedicated paragraphs to explanations or unneeded "actions" that does not add any sort of value to the story other than to increase word count. call me old fashion or stupid if you will, but i don't care for in-depth details of what he does throughout the day. but anyways, this is my first review ever so idk how reviews are meant to be made. Honestly the fic was great from the start, some solid character development from Naruto, then it goes downhill after Haku, and then completly gone after Kyuubi.

arghhhh, someone turn off the damn tap please why is there running water coming from my eyes... honestly from chap 11 ending, i was silently hoping that the worse case scenario wouldnt happen. rip the dream, congratz on actually making me feel emotions man

great story

Great chapter

While I had some problems - some serious problems- with this story, it was still fairly entertaining read. But the speech scene in this chapter... God, it felt like a forth grade student wrote the scene, it was so awful and cringe worthy. I really hate it when a character decides to have a long conversation in the middle of action, I know all of the anime does that and I hate that there too, but in this story it was tenfold. Like, you are in a fight, and you're talking about your dead girlfriend? And your academy years? Your training schedule? Tf? The worst kind of information damp

This author is stupid. I'm so annoyed right now. Oh The story? It's good. Entertaining. The problem is, in the tags, it says 'romance'. And from the beginning the author always hinted that there will be romance, but he's not saying who because it's gonna be later. Turns out, it's fucking harem! If I wanted to read harem,I would click a story that says 'harem' you idiot. Its your story, of course you can write anything you want, BUT you should tag accordingly. Tags exist for a reason you moron. If it's a relationship between kyuubi and naruto, you should say so. If its with haku, you should say so. If it is not an intimate relationship with one woman, YOU SHOUL SAY SO SND JUST WRITE 'IT'S S FUCKING HAREM STORY'.

I HATE HAREM