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Six years later and this is still one of the best fanfiic I ever read...thank for the awesome journey

ahhhh damnit, he asked for a bostaff and i bout cried, uzumakiseals, and swords, not a damn bostaff lmao

Nearly everything you said was cliché

. . .I cried. I WANNA REFUND!

Ima say it again. . . If she don't survive ima cry.

. . . If she doesn't survive I'm a cry. . .

bah. i say let him die. sarutobi has done ENOUGH already. the founding clans went extinct on his term.

Bruh just sadness... I cried a bit ngl.

Also I hate eat even more if Naruto/femkyuubi is the pairing Like give this man an actually women who like didn’t take like inspiration from their former host (aka his fucking mother) in their looks….

Literally if you didn’t do that stupid half demon bullshit, now naruto is immortal, this was shaping up to be like my favorite story and now you went and did this such cliche and not even cliche, but just annoying and immediate story turn offs. Like literally so many people do this stupid shit when rhe Bijuu AREN’T EVEN FUCKING DEMONS. THERE ARE ACTUAL FUCKING DEMONS IN NARUTO AND ITS NOT THE BIJUU! The bijuu are more like aliens… you literally could have linked your stupid star wars crossover through the fact that the bijuu (as in the juubi) are not from this planet originally… but noooooo you have to do what every other unoriginal person on this website does! And like you said “oh would you rather have a sexy vixen or a rage chakra entity for eternity” DID YOU FUCKING WATCH NARUTO?! THEY BECOME LIKE THE BEST OF HOMIES EVENTUALLY SOOOOOOO…. How tf he a rage entity when hes like one of your best friends and confidants…. So stupid

Oh holy shit! So your reasons for making Naruto half demon make me want to stop reading this story even more than the fact of you making him a half demon and kyuubi and female. Like i read this for a naruto story! Not some future fucking potential crossover sequel down the line. Fuck that shit! I am here for this story! Which is supposed to be a naruto story! Not like some fucking stupid multiverse self insert type bullshit! NA-RU-TO NOT FUCKING STAR WARS!

Also its retarded because like, the Bijuu aren’t demons! They’re fhakra constructs! There is actual demons in naruto world that like come from hell or whatever, but it is not the Bijuu! So friggin stupid.

God damnit. Why i hate this whole hes actually a demon bs that so many fanfics do. Like you already got a nice ass story! Why you gotta do this stupid yokai or whatever shit

Bunshin is a clone not a transformation…