I like this. I'm glad that you are going with the idea that he isn't a total idiot like people always make him out to be. I hate that. I'm glad you've got him learning all these things now. I can't wait for the next chapter!

have naruto paired up with yugito,fu,shion and one of them led harsh lives and be very sympathetic to all kunoichi's in konoha are either too shy or naruto is paired up with mei terumi i can handle that because mei is not and will never be a i hope that sasuke gets put in his place.

Hmmm...not a bad start. Not bad. Hope he fgets over his idiotic side eventually thoug. I liked your other Naruto better.

Hope he get's some FemKyu action, or Tayuya action here.

so far so good, now we just have to see what happens for training

next chapter when

Good,good)) please continue)

a cool start!

Well its well written, but as far as the content goes the entire first chapter is canon. i'm curious at where this will go.

to be perfictly honest i dont know about this i mean you arent the first person to do a story were he learns how the kage bushin works in the beginning and got reppetive to me but your a great writer and may make it difreint but i would love to see you make a story with him leaving the leaf maybe have him join kira or kumo their isnt much reason for him to stay loyal like an example naruto going to go read books in your story what if he found out about his clan and mito that if anything should piss him off as you can see im anti leaf person i just think their arogant and im not saying other villiges are better but leaf is the full of shit they dont even follow their own belifes of will of fire or protect your comrades look how they turned on sakumo and whent againist minto wishs their is no way in hell they think naruto is the fox or not who his father is the hade two demon hosts before and doubt is was covred up or minato wouldnt have told sarutobi to tell them and had it coverd up too about naruto minto is not stupid this must mean that both mito and naruto mom were treatied fine and their just holding a grudge because of the fox when it was released rant over and im not saying he should try to destroy the leaf just find some were else he can be exceptid

Hmm I'm liking almost all of your stories, this is good and hope he takes to training seriously, look forward to a pairing later on but still u picked the best women in your other story but maybe just pick one of those for this story

i like it, it has a great set up, the only thing that i wish to be explained in more detail is the weapon use, will he remember stuff like if he learned to curve the trajectory of a shriken, also, do you think a weapon in the first place should be incorperated into naruto?

Could you also set up the possible pairings at the end of the next chapter?

but bottem line,awsome work, hope to see more soon.

good start. Honestly, I wanna see where you go with this! update soon! Ja Ne!

Interesting first chapter, keep it up!

Great story. What pairing are you going to do for this story? Thanks for the good work and I really look forward to the next chapter.