bull spedomaru.

yugito v kiba, aka cat and dog fight

Sasuke can only do chidory twice a day kakashi can do it 4 times. Naruto has 100 times the chakra kakashi has so naruto in part 1 has at least 200 times the chakra sasuke has.

I don't normally leave reviews for fics, but I felt I needed to for this, there are 2 main points for it first the Naruto x Kyuubi relationship is just wrong on so many levels, it screams bestiality and should be purged by fire, second is making Naruto into a gad dang furry, some people might like that but it's an instant no to me.
I understand you wanted to make the pairing etc. a surprise but I honestly feel you should inform people from the beginning this is gonna be a furry bestiality story so people like myself who are seriously grossed out by that can avoid it (especially since this is a completed fic now and you just need to look at the reviews to know it ends up a harem)

I just imagined : Lee also took a sip, and then...

Anko is too old for Naruto! Unless you’re into pedaphellia.

The only thing that would have made it hit a bit harder is if naruto still had his speech to zabuzar and they both let their oni (demon) chackra lose as it would be a good prelude to him befriending gaara if he does in your Version

Y And here is where I leave it: for me it was an excellent story but well, what's going to happen?

Anime set in modern day?
Bleach.
Anime in sorta future(NEVER EDGERUNNERS!) Rwby? Maybe?

Poor Naruto.
Poor Poor Naruto.
*Smirks evilly*
It'll make it all the more delicious when she is most likely resurrected during the war! MWHAHAHAHAHA!

Your English is good so no worries there. It sounds like you don’t live in the States. Only people not living in the States worry about the grammar. Don’t sweat it. I have seen stories that were hard to follow due to misspelled words or even the wrong words used. You know what is coming next. My asking about Anko x Naruto. Just letting you know how much this means to me.

I agree with your assessment about canon Naruto for the most part. Yes mostly that Naruto is stupid but sometimes he pulls out these crazy strategies and ideas that work. To me that tells me that his smarts is not understood.I believe the best version of Naruto is that he is so smart nobody understand him. Couple that with the hate and neglect and sabotage that Naruto had to go through for years and boom. An idiot who pulls off insane plans that work while making observations that no one else sees. As for Sakura, yeah a flat chested girl who deluded herself to be I love with Sasuke while constantly torturing the only guy on her team to help her. Come on Naruto,how many years had Sakura punched you while screaming insults at you and you keep crawling back to her for more? No man would do that willingly. That is just one of many reasons that I believe Anko is a much better romance partner than Sakura.

It’s nice when awesome characters that barely get any time finally get a chance to shine. Guren was one of the best characters in the filler parts of Naruto and I wish that we saw more of her. I love how you handle the task of getting her character right while writing an awesome fight sequence. So it seems that the emo overlord has succeeded in deserting Konoha. Please please bring Anko and Naruto together please. I have been incredibly patient about this.

So this is different. It seems that Samoi is starting to move in on Naruto. So my question is this: when the hell will Anko get her chance?

I really don’t understand. I am begging you to let Anko be loved by Naruto and we get Temari cozying with him instead. Sigh…