|Reviews for Nico di Angelo|
| Aphrodite child chapter 1 . 3/5
WHO CARES! STOP LOOKING AT THE FLAWS AD LOOK AT THE GOOD!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/23
This story really touched my heart but, I still think he's cute
| DragonCrusader chapter 1 . 2/6
O.o dear gods...
| Emma chapter 1 . 2/4
HOMG. I LOVE THIS.
| me chapter 1 . 1/29
I like this, but you made nico look like a criminal. And why ramble on about his looks? Sorry about that..but u wanted the truth.
| cherriomax chapter 1 . 1/16
I'm sorry for the lack of flames... But I have to say: OH MY GODS MY POOR LITTLE BABY! Okay so now that that's done with. I like it, I agree with what your saying about Nico being way over romanticized. I mean who hasn't he been paired with? (Frank) though I am a avid supporter of Leco or valdangelo, so if I'm agreeing with you. Well, you did a good job.
| Farrox41 chapter 1 . 1/10
As a human, I understand the overwhelming desire to find mistakes and overcome them with brighter colors; always striving to improve yourself even if at first glance it looks flawless. I tried to read all the reviews to make sure not repeat any complaints, but all I saw was praise. I decided to do you a favor (although it seems more like a challenge with your note) and write you a "flame" if you could call it that. For one thing, I am surprised that insanity wasn't related to darkness. It is the main attribute that always connects with Nico. It would certainly emphasize Nico's inevitable fate to be drowned by his own parentage. Also, if you had used "darkness" as a potential flaw (if you think it is a basic word, that's all right. Sometimes, simplicity is all you need to get the point across), it would have given you space to practice the art of subtlety. Don't you want to make your readers to think? It is nice to spoon the readers the message without tripwires, but I find it fun when readers find different endings. Darkness could relate to insanity, pain, sin, loss, abandonment, self-destruction (physically and mentally), blindness ect. With all the character deaths, all of them, some, or one could apply. You are in the right track as a writer (of course, YOU would know that), but you should explore different styles. Like I said not really a flame, more like an opinion.
| Awesome as Annabeth chapter 1 . 1/9
This is so sad...
And I had emotional music playing. It's STILL playing (playlist, up to 4 hours) and this makes my heart remember the things I cherish, for some reason. You've written it beautifully, and you should be proud. :)
| L chapter 1 . 1/4
Gah! No, no, no. Not Nico. No. I'm denying it. Over and over and over.
No, no, no, no, no.
This is horrible! I hate it! It's so amazingly well written and tragic and awesome...
You are a horrible, horrible person. I love you.
And to that guest who said Hazel's not in it — well of COURSE Hazel's not in it, when the author wrote it, Son of Neptune hadn't even been released yet! Duh!
I think it's a pretty solid consensus that Nico needs to be given cookies and wrapped in a blanket...
Or at least gets a happy ending with Reyna.
What? Reynico would be awesome.
| TheWildeFiles chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
thats so sad... i cried and im a guy.
| hatergirl chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
i know cliche for my namesake but i hate i hate i hate dang nammit i hate it
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
This is me right now.
"NO ERMYGAWDS WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?!QNJKFLDSNJKFLGBHJSDKLFBCNJkbaudIZOpryfuiaslzd fbjvkcO DAMN YOU, YOU'VE MADE ME CRY GAHHHHHHH"
This is me five minutes later.
Hey, you asked for flames.
| NicoIsAwesome chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
Wow. Very dramatic. I like it. My kind of fanfic at the moment. :)
I like how it's so happy and light. -HEAVY SARCASM USE-
| FireStar chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
What happened to Hazel? Couldn't he see his sister, gosh darn it? And I don't think he would go insane. He's to strong for that, no matter how freaking STUPID that sounds. I mean, he was trapped in a jar! And forced to commit a very big secret, and he didn't go crazy then! Good gravy- and no, I am not the only person who says that.
| Jemma chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
It was okay, but a bt depressing...