Reviews for THE CHOSEN TRILOGY: BOOK III: The Burdened Ones
BannanGodis chapter 24 . 10/18/2014
I love it, thanks so much for this amazing reading! :)
Annon chapter 2 . 5/11/2014
Did you rip of Mewtwo's flashback of killing Arceus from Harry Potter
TheSkyclanCat chapter 24 . 11/12/2013
Awesome ending...! Wait, a crack on the statue? Time for the 4th story; Mewtwo's Return, since it's pretty clear that he isn't exactly "dead". :)
kairi loves sora chapter 24 . 5/1/2013
I knew that Arceus couldn't be gone for good. And I was right about Mewto! He didn't kill Arceus because he wanted to, he did it because he had to. Love that Brock could finally get married and that everyone is so happy. I tell you what that last battle you had me worried. With the way Ash was fighting I was thinking that he may not make it. But he did and it would seem that Mewto may come back as well. Thanks for all your hard work in writing a great fanfic. See ya
G'daykiller chapter 24 . 3/17/2013
i have uterly loved this story and I say bravo on you writing skills I hope that you countine writing on this site for years to come
NY514 chapter 24 . 10/19/2012
Why the hell was they're no kissing between ash and misty I mean it's freaking pokeshipping so people expect kissing
jojomacxsc chapter 24 . 10/6/2012
I just finished reading your series, and I've gotta hand it to you. This is one of the greatest stories I've ever read. Thank you.
Guest chapter 13 . 5/25/2012
I hope to see someone either get bitch slapped or punched
IamaDemivoid chapter 2 . 5/18/2012
Uhh... Is it just me or does mewtwo act like Severus snape from Harry potter. Double agent, killed his mentor, bla bla bla... But yeah... I like this story. It keeps me in suspense, a lot of suspense
poka chapter 24 . 5/1/2012
Woooo! That was awesome :D What a way to end one of the best trilogies I've ever read :)
Batthan the Dark Knight chapter 24 . 4/30/2012
Very magnificent ending! *clapping*
Hotspot the 626th chapter 24 . 4/30/2012
And thus, the trilogy has ended. It's had a good run, and it's ending was excellent. Thank you for the great story! Can't wait for the FMA story!
Novanto chapter 24 . 4/30/2012
That was an awesome story!

I see The Clone isn't 100% dead.
Reeeeeema chapter 23 . 4/25/2012
Awesome!
poka chapter 23 . 4/24/2012
I knew he wasn't dead!
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