|Reviews for Faker|
| BWagner60 chapter 34 . 9/8/2013
Well it has been almost 3 months since you have updated your story. Does this mean you have given up or just have writers block. I'm hoping you will soon add a new chapter.
| Guest chapter 34 . 6/22/2013
Please do not follow the other reviewer's suggestion to use an "x" line to delineate scenes in your story. This shows only laziness and a lack of creativity. A better way would be to use a simple elipse as is done in actual books or write the shift in scenes. For example, "Meanwhile, at Portwenn Primary, Chesley . . . ." This enhances your story more than a trick of punctuation.
| Boots1980 chapter 34 . 6/21/2013
So good to catch up with sweet Chelsey and Paul Milligan and Sally Tishell. Progress on all fronts
| Limaccia chapter 33 . 6/20/2013
Has anyone mentioned that when you change scenes, you need to delineate it in some way? Otherwise, the abrupt switch is confusing. For example, something like these rows of x's:
Jane suddenly realised that she was out in the middle of the street in just her pyjamas and said,
'Good idea. I'll do it.'
Paul Milligan looked at Louisa thoughtfully, pursing his lips as he tried to decide whether or not Danny having dinner with Louisa and Martin was a good idea. Louisa waited patiently and eventually Paul said,
* * * *
'Oh,' said Louisa nonplussed, 'so we shouldn't have dinner with him, then?'
'Let me talk to Danny before you do anything; I could be wrong about his motivation.'
Joe Penhale drew up alongside the prone man with a squeal of brakes and leapt out of his vehicle. Going over to where Jane Baker, now dressed, was waiting with Mrs Evans, Joe took out his notebook and pencil and said magisterially,
| D Charles chapter 11 . 6/19/2013
Let me just say this is a wonderful story, I am so glad you decided to update. If you have been working on it since publication you have proved that time yields victorious results. It is simply fantastic so far. You guys who write these stories are unbelieveable, so gifted. I do not know why you are not well established authors by now. It is so late but I cannot stop reading. I will not write any more reviews until I have done reading the entire story. Well I hope I can contain myself. Cheers!
| D Charles chapter 7 . 6/19/2013
Author's deserve feedback when the chapters are this good. I absolutely loved the way you allowed Martin to immediately feel the rejection that is so close the the surface in his life. When Louisa told Danny in chap. 6 that she loved him. The first thing Martin thought was that she never loved him. He never thought for a moment that she was saying that to calm Danny or distract him or whatever. All Martin could think was, if his mother doesn't love him how could anyone else. You are brilliant. This chap is the same, Martin is such a good Doctor he would never in a million years dream of not treating a sick patient. Remember when he was supposed to meet Edith and Robert at the restaurant and Marigold's husband got sick on the moor. Martin said "there is a sick man on the moor, I am on the moor and I am a doctor." You have captured his reason for living, to help others no matter how much he hates them. Ha Ha Cheers!
| D Charles chapter 4 . 6/19/2013
I don't usually like to review between chapters but this is getting exciting. I like the fact that Danny is in it, and that Martin has to try and stop him from killing himself. Or is it Martin he intended to kill all along ? This is good. Cheers!
| Chapin chapter 34 . 6/19/2013
Wow - a renewal of two stories this week. Glad for a general catch-up and really look forward to this many faceted story continuing.
| fanficfan71 chapter 34 . 6/19/2013
Nice chapter MM, looking forward to your next update.
| Kumquat12 chapter 2 . 2/17/2013
I am enjoying this multi-part story. Please keep going.
| Sendibo chapter 33 . 11/28/2012
Great chapter :)
| statesidefan chapter 33 . 11/25/2012
Thanks for the latest chapter, madmother!
| robspace54 chapter 33 . 11/25/2012
More medical kerfuffles for the Doc and a healthy dose of spitup.
Glad you got back to the keyboard.
| Chapin chapter 33 . 11/24/2012
Good chapter. I assure you that your readers are very glad you posted another chapter. The interaction of all these characters is wonderful. Glad to see Louisa resolute and realistic. An additional chapter would be a nice Christmas present.
| Guest chapter 32 . 8/18/2012
Absolutely love your stories Madmother - can't wait for more