|Reviews for Written in the Stars 2|
| smiles2go chapter 15 . 3/15/2014
I enjoyed this very much
| tnbutterfly chapter 15 . 1/22/2014
I love this story line. Many times Tim has not been treated right, esp by Abby. For that reason I won't watch the dog episode. Tim is a great character. Thank you for setting things right.
| ananova chapter 15 . 1/16/2014
Great story, once I ignored the various plot holes. Not pointing them out to be mean, I think you had some really great ideas and I definitely liked the story. Just trying to help you become a better writer. Thanks for writing and sharing this, I enjoyed reading it.
| ananova chapter 10 . 1/16/2014
Alright, how did Gibbs get to Colorado so fast? That's almost half the country away. While I'm enjoying the story I do have to point out that there are holes in the plot. I've decided that I'm just going to ignore all of these holes for now in order to enjoy the story, which I still think is really good. Thanks for sharing it.
| ananova chapter 1 . 1/15/2014
While this seems like an interesting story, I'm confused on a couple of points. I read your author's note and understand wanting to keep certain characters around but it messes with your continuity since you had Jack as a General in the previous story. That's something you might want to address at some point. The other thing is why is Tim at the mountain? Even if he is in the know about the SGC, that doesn't mean he would be let in at the drop of a hat. Besides, Jack has a house so why wouldn't he bring him there to spend time instead of to the base? I get that's convenient to have him on base so that Janet can quickly treat him and all, but it still doesn't make much sense.
Still, this seems like an interesting story so I'm going to stick with it. And no, I didn't like the way Abby acted in that episode at all.
| LPeck chapter 15 . 10/11/2013
Wasn't expecting to love these crossovers but I do, they clearly show that SG1 had great relationships and NCIS have some that are sometimes cruel and demining.
| Writingperson chapter 6 . 6/25/2013
err, how did ducky know kelly? she died before gibbs came to NCIS and before NCIS ducky was in the british military
| Andreinne chapter 15 . 2/7/2013
I liked your story. And I have to admit, the only place where I seem to find people who dislike Abby as much as I do seems to be in the fanfiction world. hahaha. In RL, everyone's shocked when I tell them I hate Abby. P
| Alkcalien chapter 3 . 10/4/2012
Interesting concept! I didn't start watching SG-1 till season 9, but I can see Tim fitting in with the group. I see there's a WIS 3, so I have some more to look forward to.
| KaiShadower chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Who did like Abby's treatment toward Tim in dog tags. By the way nice to know that there are some people who care about Tim such as Jack
| OCMichael chapter 15 . 9/19/2012
WOW... That was really intense. Your story made some really excellent points.
| FORD B chapter 15 . 6/12/2012
| trout1986 chapter 14 . 1/26/2012
"Amazing how confident you can be when you get a compliment and not a put down isn't it."
I really enjoyed this.
| Saissa chapter 15 . 11/28/2011
OMG - this was a damn good story and has needed to be told for such a long time.
Tim Mcgee is my most favourite charcter on NCIS (I love the way he can find anything on those computers - I love computers geeks) and Tony is my least favourite for the absolutely lousy way he treats Tim.
So if Tim has been on the team for 2 or 3 years, he should have long since been taken OFF probation - and yet Tony still calls him Probie! That really sucks.
And what the heck is with all those clips up the back of the head - those are not necessary - that is physical ABUSE - pure and simple.
I notice that Gibbs does them to Tony and then Tony does them to Tim but Tim is not permitted to do them to anyone.
Part 1 was great. Part 2 is wonderful. Now to read part 3.
| cato1850 chapter 15 . 10/6/2011
Great story. I'm glad Tim finally gets the respect he deserves.