|Reviews for Temporally Coincident Occurrence Of Acausal Events|
| MyLittleBird chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
Poor Jason and Dick. Very well written.
| Aka Wouka chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
I like it. Just two questions.
1. Where was the person who locked them up? I didn't understand that part.
2. dialect should be derelict towards the end there.
| ReaperTot chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
Had great undertones. Loved the interaction between them. ]
| MyHero chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Keep writing dude, cuz this was great! :D
I hope you might make a part two! * Crosses fingers hopefully keep *
Really an excellent story! Thanks you for writing!